Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Patty - this is a lovely, and very cute poem in Monchielle form - yet another form I've not heard of. Reading your notes you have accomplished the form well and told a very sweet poem about two very cute looking dogs. They look even cuter before the haircut I would like to bet. LOL. Wrm regards Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Hi Dorothy; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your warm comments and I'll pass the compliments along to the dogs,
~patty~
I took some new pictures today - they came out awesome

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

I don't know what we would do without our two sweeties. I think you got a lot about the pups in your short poem. I love it and I love your picture. Great job.
hugs heidi

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Hi Heidi; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. Dogs certainly make life sweeter,
~patty~
I took some new pictures of the dogs today and they came out wonderful

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your humour poem "Pretty Pups Make My day.". With puppyies like those how could you live without them? I also loved your photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Hi; thank you so much for your kind review. My dogs are a constant source of inspiration, and I'm happy that their stories are so well accepted,
~patty~

reply by marybell1 on 25-Apr-2017

You and they are most welcome.
Marybel1.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I am a huge fan of children's poetry, Patty so this is right up my alley.

My land those little rascals are just adorable, haircut or not.

Great job and many thanks for sharing. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Hi Gloria; thank you for your kind review. I was wondering how this poem would appeal to lovers of children's poetry. I didn't intend for it to fit that market, but the rhyming scheme does lend itself to that genre. Hmmm
~patty~

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

A delightful poem dedicated to your energetic pups. What work they must be LOL
With that said, they probably had a paw in this haha

What a wag! Well done. Animals REALLY can tap into a differen set of emotions with a human. The wonderful thing is they are in no way biased. They just love us warts and all...so long as we keep supplying the food haha

Cheers P

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Hi; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words, and I love your comments about dogs. They are wonderful companions,
~patty~

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Those pups are adorable. I can see how they'd make your day. They're so full of fun and love you have to forgive a few messes. And they're so good, not eating shoes.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017

Hi; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words, and I love your comments about dogs. They are wonderful companions,
~patty~

Comment from Kerry Foley

Excellent

I sure love The Monchielle, I have never heard this style yet Patty. You did it well. I always love your puppy poems, they look so cute with their haircut, sooooo fluffy lol.
~Kerry

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi Kerry; thank you so much for the warm and kind review. I appreciate your time,
~patty~

reply by Kerry Foley on 24-Apr-2017

Your welcome

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

This is a fun poem and of course, I love reading about playful doggies. "Fuzzy toes and tummy" remind me of my dachshund, he is fuzzy and very playful. I like the repeating lines, they add to the strength of the poem.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review. This was a fun poetic form to work with. Putting it together was like working on a puzzle - I just tackled the requirements one at a time,
~patty~

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This monchielle, Pretty Pups Make My Day, does all the things called for with this format, and we get to see the boys back in action again. Nice.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

Hi Bill; thank you so much for your kind review of this poem. I'm glad you enjoyed seeing my furry kids back in action,
~patty~

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Awe, bless them, Patty. Nothing better than a couple of dogs messing things up. We have a big , a really big dog and he does nothing of the sort, but our cats seem to fit the bill. I loved your great poem. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read this poem dedicated to my furry kids. I had a ball writing this one, and I'm glad its been so well received,
~patty~