Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You kept it at 16 syllables, perfect.

this is a perfectly done piece. Count is perfectly done and the following lines are perfect. The four tells about the piece and the last part is perfect telling of your interpretation

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Someone didn't know where this poem "was going", That pulled at my confidence. Many thanks for your kind review and stars for my nighttime sky LOL

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 12-Apr-2017

It took me a long time to realize this is the kind of piece that every one interrurerts differently and we are to review on the writing and count and not what we interrupt as. It is perfectly done in what I understand of the form

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Oh I think it was interpreted for the content because the person liked the quote....thanks

reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

I think the person was interpreting the content. That zapped my confidence a little......thanks

reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 12-Apr-2017

For what I have done, it is perfectly done. Rules are followed and the last part is made personal for everyone.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Positive and warm words, and faithful sentiments here in your short but profound words, the artwork is exceptional too, a joy to read and very uplifting, best wishes Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Thanks for your encouraging and warm review. The stars are always welcome too

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I like the quotation you have chosen to start your triad and shall be interested to read in due course the direction that you have taken it! I think this might have been released early accidentally!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

It was, but I changed the title - does that help? Thanks for reviewing