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Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very interesting 7x7 poem you have penned about football. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
Bill, This is a very interesting 7x7 poem you have penned about football. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from nomi338
Of course this is just my thinking, but could it be that you might have watched a couple movies more than maybe you should have? Like me, you show a decided bent, slightly off kilter sensibility. I really like and admire that.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
Of course this is just my thinking, but could it be that you might have watched a couple movies more than maybe you should have? Like me, you show a decided bent, slightly off kilter sensibility. I really like and admire that.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Thank you, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from mbroyles2
You are definitely one of the more prolific poets we have on this site.
This is another fine example of your skill.
Terrific imagery and and excellent pace.
Fantastic writing!
Michael
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
You are definitely one of the more prolific poets we have on this site.
This is another fine example of your skill.
Terrific imagery and and excellent pace.
Fantastic writing!
Michael
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Michael, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing this whimsical tale of Wilson, the soccer ball. You were able to tell the story from the ball's point of view, and make it clear within the lines of the poem. A suggestion; change the color of your font OR the background. It is a bit difficult to read right now,
~patty~
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
Thank you for sharing this whimsical tale of Wilson, the soccer ball. You were able to tell the story from the ball's point of view, and make it clear within the lines of the poem. A suggestion; change the color of your font OR the background. It is a bit difficult to read right now,
~patty~
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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I see that now. I darkened the background. TY.