Undivided
Two hearts, one soul2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
The is a fine entry for the contest of six words
Divided by the oceans, but not by spirit or soul
Good use of sound with the many "o" sounds
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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The is a fine entry for the contest of six words
Divided by the oceans, but not by spirit or soul
Good use of sound with the many "o" sounds
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Undivided'- the title is unique.
This poem is good.
It has 6 words which follows the guidelines.
The image is great. It fits the poem perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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'Undivided'- the title is unique.
This poem is good.
It has 6 words which follows the guidelines.
The image is great. It fits the poem perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review.