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Comment from nomi338
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My life was very strongly affected by my mother and my two sisters early on. Later in life I have been very strongly affected by my wife, my two daughters and my grand daughter. So I very much agree with your statement.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Here's to the ladies.
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the four ladies in stone. You used very good imagery with the art work and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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'Works' is a lovely 5-7-5 poem.
Each line is a perfect fit.- Just the right amount of syllables.
The artwork is outstanding.- It's beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thanks, Nicole.
Comment from mbroyles2
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You presented this poem well and chose an excellent picture.
Great example of four women who must have been close during life, now closer in death.
Excellent writing!
Michael

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
    Thank you, Michael.