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Comment from strandregs
I enjoyed it.
dear mikel having reached the respectable age of 60 without any official medical diagnosis and feeling crap fo 30 years I can officially tell you.
the doctors in England know shit about health.
all they know is to push drugs.
I might even potlatch .
high ho...:-)) Z.
can't help with structure.
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I enjoyed it.
dear mikel having reached the respectable age of 60 without any official medical diagnosis and feeling crap fo 30 years I can officially tell you.
the doctors in England know shit about health.
all they know is to push drugs.
I might even potlatch .
high ho...:-)) Z.
can't help with structure.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I like the story about the tonsils, Mikey, I think I got mine out about the same time, LOL. Looking back, I think I must've died almost, it took so long for me to come out of the anaesthetic. Your play is most unusual, but I think it has a great ending and the dialogue is very clever. Well done, Giddy
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I like the story about the tonsils, Mikey, I think I got mine out about the same time, LOL. Looking back, I think I must've died almost, it took so long for me to come out of the anaesthetic. Your play is most unusual, but I think it has a great ending and the dialogue is very clever. Well done, Giddy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL I thank this is absolutely the cutest thing on health care I have ever seen. Absolutley wonderfully done in the interaction and the imagination is great...glad you did not grow up.lol
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LOL I thank this is absolutely the cutest thing on health care I have ever seen. Absolutley wonderfully done in the interaction and the imagination is great...glad you did not grow up.lol
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know you are one of the best authors on this site, but I will be honest; I struggled staying focused on this post. It may be because I'm tired. I hope it's just me.
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I know you are one of the best authors on this site, but I will be honest; I struggled staying focused on this post. It may be because I'm tired. I hope it's just me.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
Comment from patcelaw
The script was a bit hard to follow, but one thing I got from it is this. As we get older we never really see ourselves being as old as the calendar says we are. I for one do not feel anywhere near my almost 79 calendar years. Patricia
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The script was a bit hard to follow, but one thing I got from it is this. As we get older we never really see ourselves being as old as the calendar says we are. I for one do not feel anywhere near my almost 79 calendar years. Patricia
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
Comment from Pantygynt
Having read the notes following my reading of the script I think that you intended this as a series of dialogue practices. the common thread that unites the whole is the hospital enviroment whether back in the year dot in the first scene of up to date in the others.
So the first scene is there to show how advanced surgery has become but it cannot cure old age, however wiling the patients may be for this to happen.
I can see you at some future style reaching back into your portfolio and pulling bits out that make sense in the context of whatever you are writing.
An interesting experiment and worth five for bravery.
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Having read the notes following my reading of the script I think that you intended this as a series of dialogue practices. the common thread that unites the whole is the hospital enviroment whether back in the year dot in the first scene of up to date in the others.
So the first scene is there to show how advanced surgery has become but it cannot cure old age, however wiling the patients may be for this to happen.
I can see you at some future style reaching back into your portfolio and pulling bits out that make sense in the context of whatever you are writing.
An interesting experiment and worth five for bravery.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
Comment from crzypnter
mikey,
This is a wonderful script that when read keeps a person interested as you stroll down through the story. At the end you tie it all together. Intriguing style thanks for sharing. God bless
August
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mikey,
This is a wonderful script that when read keeps a person interested as you stroll down through the story. At the end you tie it all together. Intriguing style thanks for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
Comment from apky
Georgia
I'm rivaling Niagara Falls right now thinking about last night. And I can tell I could hang a porch swing off what your poking me with, boy. Why play the decrepit act? I'd be bragging.
I'd be so proud of myself if I had your kind of humour, Michael!
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Georgia
I'm rivaling Niagara Falls right now thinking about last night. And I can tell I could hang a porch swing off what your poking me with, boy. Why play the decrepit act? I'd be bragging.
I'd be so proud of myself if I had your kind of humour, Michael!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
What I want to know is - if scene 1V is fact or just wishful thinking LOL
Good job with this one as you takes us through the scenes from little boy, to old man and in between. Creative write for our health topic, well thought out mikey.
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What I want to know is - if scene 1V is fact or just wishful thinking LOL
Good job with this one as you takes us through the scenes from little boy, to old man and in between. Creative write for our health topic, well thought out mikey.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, honey,
The plot is intriguing and the topic contemporary. The Trumpdontcare republicans' s health care is as shameful as trump and his bunch of incompetent cabinet is.
I never saw a script like yours, without punctuation. It's hard to follow at times.
Overall it's a good script. Thank you for sharing, Michael.
Gypsy hugs
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Hello, honey,
The plot is intriguing and the topic contemporary. The Trumpdontcare republicans' s health care is as shameful as trump and his bunch of incompetent cabinet is.
I never saw a script like yours, without punctuation. It's hard to follow at times.
Overall it's a good script. Thank you for sharing, Michael.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 20-Mar-2017