Farewell Summer
A tribute to John Keats4 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I really liked your artwork. The fog always makes one think of late Autumn and winter. I think you completed the challenge of this contest well.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. I really liked your artwork. The fog always makes one think of late Autumn and winter. I think you completed the challenge of this contest well.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my Autumn ode. I am indebted to Keats for his great work and none can sum up this season better than he.
Comment from Bill Schott
This ode to autumn, Farewell Summer, has a nice set up and employs Keats to aid in envisioning the full extent of the season changing picture:
SEASON of mists and mellow fruitfulness,...
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eaves run;
To bend with apples the moss'd cottage-trees,...
Nice.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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This ode to autumn, Farewell Summer, has a nice set up and employs Keats to aid in envisioning the full extent of the season changing picture:
SEASON of mists and mellow fruitfulness,...
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eaves run;
To bend with apples the moss'd cottage-trees,...
Nice.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Bill. This Ode of Keats is a favourite of mine. As a young teenager I recited it at an eisteddford.
Comment from rspoet
Between Keats and yourself, you have a fine 5-7-5 poem
With excellent imagery of autumn
and a little alliteration, too
Exact syllables to the form
and the excellent art work, this is a solid entry
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Between Keats and yourself, you have a fine 5-7-5 poem
With excellent imagery of autumn
and a little alliteration, too
Exact syllables to the form
and the excellent art work, this is a solid entry
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Wow, what an encouraging review. Thank you so much.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written a fine example of this form using this author you have done well to accomplish the challenge I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Yes this is well written a fine example of this form using this author you have done well to accomplish the challenge I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thank you ,Jill, for your positive comments and warm wishes