Autumn Thieves
5-7-5 Ode to Autumn8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
"Tree huggers welcome"--I like that. That will keep hearts warm.
This is a nicely written and illustrated nature 5-7-5. Well described.
Each word has meaning. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2017
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"Tree huggers welcome"--I like that. That will keep hearts warm.
This is a nicely written and illustrated nature 5-7-5. Well described.
Each word has meaning. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2017
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Hi Marilyn, Thanks so much for the review and so sorry for long delay in replying busy with my Mum who got sick but now slowly recovering so have not been on FS for a while Glad you liked this Haiku Cheers Christine😃👍
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Hi Chris. So sorry your mum hasn't been well. I'm glad you're back. Marilyn
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I really like the first two lines of your poem. They conveyed the feeling of autumn for the reader. I felt the last line destroyed it, just my opinion.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. I really like the first two lines of your poem. They conveyed the feeling of autumn for the reader. I felt the last line destroyed it, just my opinion.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Hi Winnona.Thanks for your review and comments and that is Ok Everyones taste is different so no problems appreciate your time anyway.
Comment from William Ross
Very nice, this is a good 5.7.5 and ode to autumn, tree huggers welcome I like that. Good luck on this, should do well, have a great day
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Very nice, this is a good 5.7.5 and ode to autumn, tree huggers welcome I like that. Good luck on this, should do well, have a great day
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Hi William. Thanks for saying you liked the tree huggers I thought the bare cold trees may do with a hug LOLYou have a great day too Cheers
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the contest
A little different take on autumn from the usual
as thieves steal the warm coat from the tree
Excellent third line, as a warm hug would be very welcome
Good choice of photograph to match poem
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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This is a fine entry for the contest
A little different take on autumn from the usual
as thieves steal the warm coat from the tree
Excellent third line, as a warm hug would be very welcome
Good choice of photograph to match poem
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Hi Robert, Thanks for a look in for my Haiku and as usual I try to do do something a bit different so this is it and I thought a tree hug would help kee the trees warm LOL . Cheers my friend Christine😃🍂
Comment from sue133
I really like your poem and, in so few words, you conjoured up a clever image of Autumn. My mind kept thinking of Keats poem and the contrast of yours was exciting. I loved the last line! Susan
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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I really like your poem and, in so few words, you conjoured up a clever image of Autumn. My mind kept thinking of Keats poem and the contrast of yours was exciting. I loved the last line! Susan
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Hi Susan, Thanks for popping by to review my 5-7-5 for Autumn and so glad you liked this different take on Autumn. A big tree hug to you Cheers Christine😃🙆
Comment from Bill Schott
This ode to autumn, Autumn Thieves, has the right setup and has us in the embarrassing predicament of having to witness naked trees. Tree huggers are indeed welcome and may already be on the way.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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This ode to autumn, Autumn Thieves, has the right setup and has us in the embarrassing predicament of having to witness naked trees. Tree huggers are indeed welcome and may already be on the way.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Hi Bill Thanks for your review and I will look out for the tree huggers Cheers
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and a creative contest entry using this form the syllable count is correct well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Yes this is well written and a creative contest entry using this form the syllable count is correct well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Hi Jill. A bit different and a bit of fun with this prompt Thans for the hug LOL
Comment from ronnie k
Wonderful expression and an inviting review "Tree huggers welcome" "autumn thieves steal their warm coat" thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Wonderful expression and an inviting review "Tree huggers welcome" "autumn thieves steal their warm coat" thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Hi Ronnie Appreciate your comments and Thanks for reading Cheers