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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Ew!"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from Halfree
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Cute and so true....coming from a large family, I understand how the things get passed around, especially if you share a big ol' bed. I thought this well done and got a chuckle. Back when my children were small, caught everything from them, especially when they came to my lap for comfort. Got another round with grand children.
Like you poem...took me back a few years.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thanks, Halfree.
Comment from DonandVicki
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Wash your hands and don't pick your nose, be careful where your kisses go. A fun poem about socializing and the pitfalls thereof.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
    Thank you.