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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Fountain Pens Have No Eraser"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from robyn corum
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Aiona,

This is definitely one of the best antonym poems I have read so far! This is fun and light and doesn't take itself so seriously. I reallllly enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
    Thanks, robyn.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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The creation of art, now matter what the form is hard. The curse of the blank page haunts every type of artist. Sometimes I curse the use of my computer when I'm writing - every sentence is self-edited before it fully hits the page!

I like the idea of using a fountain pen. It would be better to get the words out and down on paper with ink - a good start for the editing process.

Thank you for sharing this well penned piece,
~patty~

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
    Thank you, patty.