Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Don't Be Afraid"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from Commando
I'm reaching to the sky, grasping hold on a star, then putting it with the six of these. "Don't Be Afraid" is commendably written, Aiona. Always keep ink on your quill, and your juices flowing. The Art Work is awesome. Your profile is professional. Of course, "I'm guessing," when I say, "Either yourself, or someone dear, is Navy." Wishing you, "Good Health and Happiness always."
Respectfully,
Bill
PS: Thanks for your grammar help on: "Swing High Swing Low." I "Salute,You!"
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
I'm reaching to the sky, grasping hold on a star, then putting it with the six of these. "Don't Be Afraid" is commendably written, Aiona. Always keep ink on your quill, and your juices flowing. The Art Work is awesome. Your profile is professional. Of course, "I'm guessing," when I say, "Either yourself, or someone dear, is Navy." Wishing you, "Good Health and Happiness always."
Respectfully,
Bill
PS: Thanks for your grammar help on: "Swing High Swing Low." I "Salute,You!"
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you, junglefighter (Bill). Funny that you mention keeping ink on my quill. I've gotten back into using my fountain pen lately.
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And "Thank You," Aiona.
Comment from William Ross
Hahha, good have a beer all will come clear lol , a good 4 line entry on the prompt Thanks for the share and good luck on this. Have a great day
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
Hahha, good have a beer all will come clear lol , a good 4 line entry on the prompt Thanks for the share and good luck on this. Have a great day
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you, William.
Comment from marybell1
"Don't be afraid" Is a lovely 4 line poem with the correct number of syllables. It is suggesting that life is to be enjoyed and to make the most of. A good idea. Sometimes we can be afraid to take the plunge for fear of the outcome.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
"Don't be afraid" Is a lovely 4 line poem with the correct number of syllables. It is suggesting that life is to be enjoyed and to make the most of. A good idea. Sometimes we can be afraid to take the plunge for fear of the outcome.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Marybell1.
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You'r most welcome.
Marybell1.