Frog in the Fog
essence poem61 total reviews
Comment from Realist101
OH this is great! Congrats! And I picked this to read as we live on a road called Frogg Lane. No kidding. And the peepers back here are so loud! I love it, but it's a sort of bad/rough neighborhood. Sadly. But this little poem is awesome. A wonderful read with the perfect rhymes!! :) Susan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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OH this is great! Congrats! And I picked this to read as we live on a road called Frogg Lane. No kidding. And the peepers back here are so loud! I love it, but it's a sort of bad/rough neighborhood. Sadly. But this little poem is awesome. A wonderful read with the perfect rhymes!! :) Susan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed my fun little frog poem.
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Comment from rama devi
What a clever entry! great originality, Great imagery., Great rhyming. Great presentation. I see why this won. Essence poems look easy but it is quite difficult to pen a good one. Well done! I love the unusual consonance of G plus alliteration of F, giving this a cohesive phonetic resonance.
Kudos!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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What a clever entry! great originality, Great imagery., Great rhyming. Great presentation. I see why this won. Essence poems look easy but it is quite difficult to pen a good one. Well done! I love the unusual consonance of G plus alliteration of F, giving this a cohesive phonetic resonance.
Kudos!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the six! Yes, essence poems are harder than they look. But this was a fun contest. I'm so glad you liked my entry.
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Comment from Joan E.
What an enchanting artwork and clever Essence poem! - No wonder you won the contest--it's not easy to include internal rhyme in a tiny form. Congratulations and keep the posts coming! -Joan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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What an enchanting artwork and clever Essence poem! - No wonder you won the contest--it's not easy to include internal rhyme in a tiny form. Congratulations and keep the posts coming! -Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks. So glad you liked my little essence poem. It was a fun contest.
Comment from BeasPeas
OMGoodness, Cindy, this is charming. Congratulations on winning the contest. It was very foggy here in Wisconsin today and my plan was to write a fog poem. When I saw the title of yours, I HAD to read it. Illustrated beautifully, too. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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OMGoodness, Cindy, this is charming. Congratulations on winning the contest. It was very foggy here in Wisconsin today and my plan was to write a fog poem. When I saw the title of yours, I HAD to read it. Illustrated beautifully, too. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Thanks. It was a fun little poem to write. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Mustang Patty
I can see why this poem won the contest. You did a great job with the essence poem, and your words conjured up memories of hunting frogs in the early morning fog.
Congratulations on your win!
~patty~
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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I can see why this poem won the contest. You did a great job with the essence poem, and your words conjured up memories of hunting frogs in the early morning fog.
Congratulations on your win!
~patty~
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Thanks. It was a fun contest. I'm so glad you liked my poem.
Comment from Janet Foor
Congratulations on the win. This is an excellent Essence poem. Beautiful picture with excellent rhyme and internal rhyme to meet the requirement of the form.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Congratulations on the win. This is an excellent Essence poem. Beautiful picture with excellent rhyme and internal rhyme to meet the requirement of the form.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from robyn corum
Cindy,
What a fun poem! I like the idea of the hidden frog on the log in the fog in the bog. It's like a tongue-twister! You could save the info for the next contest! hahahaha! The image is a perfect go-with! Thanks and congrats!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Cindy,
What a fun poem! I like the idea of the hidden frog on the log in the fog in the bog. It's like a tongue-twister! You could save the info for the next contest! hahahaha! The image is a perfect go-with! Thanks and congrats!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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There's an idea! We should do a tongue-twister contest. LOL Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I knew this was a winner just as soon as I read it yesterday when posted, Cindy.
I loved the ethereal qualities ingrained and intermingled within the message of this simple yet alluring poem.
Congratulations on your well-earned win.
~Dean
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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I knew this was a winner just as soon as I read it yesterday when posted, Cindy.
I loved the ethereal qualities ingrained and intermingled within the message of this simple yet alluring poem.
Congratulations on your well-earned win.
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Thanks. Glad you thought so. There was at least one other I thought had a pretty good chance. Thanks again for the wonderful review.
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My pleasure, Cindy.
Comment from Lulube
Congratulations! such a simple 2 line poem, wrong, internal and ending rhyme, with only 6 syllables per line and create such great imagery such as you have done, is well, boggling to me. great penning, great choice for subject for rhyming with.
lulube
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Congratulations! such a simple 2 line poem, wrong, internal and ending rhyme, with only 6 syllables per line and create such great imagery such as you have done, is well, boggling to me. great penning, great choice for subject for rhyming with.
lulube
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed my fun little poem.
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welcome\
lulube
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, this a great picture , i love it. And a greater writing with fantastic imagery there is the white ghostly fog and the bog
And there is the frog on the log. A very sustained picture.
Great picture.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Hi friend, this a great picture , i love it. And a greater writing with fantastic imagery there is the white ghostly fog and the bog
And there is the frog on the log. A very sustained picture.
Great picture.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Thanks. I'm so glad you liked my little poem.
