Comment from Halfree

Excellent

Oh what the hell, liked that little ditty. And it pays one point and one cent...I always like a bargain, snap 'em up when I can. However I do like the poem, 2 cents not withstanding.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2017

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Thanks, Halfree

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Aiona, LOL - ok point taken, and short sorta sweet valentine. Good luck in the contest with this one.
Thanks for sharing.
M

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2017

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Thanks, Maureen :)

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

hahha a good take on roses are red for this valentines prompt poem. Nicely done on this. good luck and have yourself a wonderful day

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

---

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

William, thank you :

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork.
-Good poem.
-Good use of color imagery
in lines one and two.
-I particularly like the last two lines.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

---

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thank you. Any suggestions for improvement?

reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Feb-2017

The only thing is it didn't have to be four lines if you look at the contest. I don't know that that is an issue. What you have is good. You have a good twist with the dialogue in the last two lines. I hope that helps.