The Perfect Valentine
From Different Perspectives7 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The irony of each perspective on romance from the male and female perspective, intriguing write, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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The irony of each perspective on romance from the male and female perspective, intriguing write, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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thank you
Comment from Marvin Calloway
The Perfect Valentine, times two. You doubled your readers enjoyment and deserve 12 stars.
Nicely done. Reading the lines in male/female pairs is another way to enjoy this poem. I'd like to see you do this with other special days.
Marv
Marv
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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The Perfect Valentine, times two. You doubled your readers enjoyment and deserve 12 stars.
Nicely done. Reading the lines in male/female pairs is another way to enjoy this poem. I'd like to see you do this with other special days.
Marv
Marv
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Marv! And thanks for the 6. You are very kind!
Hmm, never thought of comparing the two for other special days - good idea.
I hope you're coming along with your writing!
Many thank again!
K
Comment from closetpoetjester
LOL You are SO witty and I just loved this "perfect" write from head to toe, from the kitchen to the loungeroom and beyond comparing notes along the way between the sexes.
Your superb rhymes and terrific closer show everyone who is boss. Yep, vital that he like Mum haha
Sixer for you! Really well written.
Cheers P
PS Not so sure about the Ryan Gosling thing though...more like Orlando Bloom for me...but I exchanged that bit haha
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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LOL You are SO witty and I just loved this "perfect" write from head to toe, from the kitchen to the loungeroom and beyond comparing notes along the way between the sexes.
Your superb rhymes and terrific closer show everyone who is boss. Yep, vital that he like Mum haha
Sixer for you! Really well written.
Cheers P
PS Not so sure about the Ryan Gosling thing though...more like Orlando Bloom for me...but I exchanged that bit haha
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the six and for your exuberant enthusiasm! Reviews like this make writing all worth while! You"ain't" no slouch yo'self!!! girl! Just read your hairdresser piece - what a hoot!
Anyway, thanks a million. Oh - so you're not partial to old Ryan G? well everybody should substitute their own hottie.
Cheers, yourself! K
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is an exceptional piece for the Valentine's Poetry contest. I love the different takes on the different sides and yet there is a common goal in mind. Nice rhyming and such a cute idea
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This is an exceptional piece for the Valentine's Poetry contest. I love the different takes on the different sides and yet there is a common goal in mind. Nice rhyming and such a cute idea
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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thank you! I loved your "water" piece!
K
Comment from jusylee72
Very clever. Showing the two different views in this Accrostic. I enjoyed it. However as a woman I promise I would not always think you were right, But you have a sense of humor so I am sure I would like the man in this poem. Clever.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Very clever. Showing the two different views in this Accrostic. I enjoyed it. However as a woman I promise I would not always think you were right, But you have a sense of humor so I am sure I would like the man in this poem. Clever.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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well, jusylee72, guess what? I live in San Antonio, too! how 'bout that?
glad you enjoyed my poem . thanks.
Comment from Thal1959
A very interesting double acrostic on Valentine - from the point of view of both genders. Clever and thoughtful. Well rhymed and composed. Sorry that I am out of sixes. Please consider this five star as a "virtual" six.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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A very interesting double acrostic on Valentine - from the point of view of both genders. Clever and thoughtful. Well rhymed and composed. Sorry that I am out of sixes. Please consider this five star as a "virtual" six.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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well, I feel just as honored as if it were! thank you! And I'm out of reviewer recommendations!
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I appreciate that - and don't worry about reviewer recommendations. I'm not sure they ever really pick a reviewer of the month... at least I haven't seen them pick one.
Comment from robyn corum
HAHAHA! The most important thing is that they think I'm perfect, of course! HAHAHA! This is a fun one. But I keep seeing so many Valentine's poems - February 14th STILL IS Valentine's, right? It hasn't been moved up on me, has it? hahaha I still have time, right? Thanks!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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HAHAHA! The most important thing is that they think I'm perfect, of course! HAHAHA! This is a fun one. But I keep seeing so many Valentine's poems - February 14th STILL IS Valentine's, right? It hasn't been moved up on me, has it? hahaha I still have time, right? Thanks!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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for the contest - just something to do. don't know whether they have a quota or not but you better get with it, girl