I hate rats
A Lowku poem: 5-7-5 syll, no rhyme10 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Most people hate rats,
consider them dirty beasts,
spreading diseases. ......5/7/5 syllable count... good job.
@What? you slept with rats? I never heard of anything like this. I don't even like to sleep with dogs or cats ... but to each their own.
Good job with the poem. It's definitely gross and it has the right form.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
Most people hate rats,
consider them dirty beasts,
spreading diseases. ......5/7/5 syllable count... good job.
@What? you slept with rats? I never heard of anything like this. I don't even like to sleep with dogs or cats ... but to each their own.
Good job with the poem. It's definitely gross and it has the right form.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a great week.
Comment from azwildrosa
This is a disgusting entry for this prompt. I don't mind them so much as pets but not loose in my house or any where else. Like in caves where its already creepy. They just add to it. Your met the required 5-7-5 rthis promt. great picture to go with it. this is a good entry for this prompt. thank you for sharing. best wishes to you in the booths.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
This is a disgusting entry for this prompt. I don't mind them so much as pets but not loose in my house or any where else. Like in caves where its already creepy. They just add to it. Your met the required 5-7-5 rthis promt. great picture to go with it. this is a good entry for this prompt. thank you for sharing. best wishes to you in the booths.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from marinadawn
I am sorry to say but I hate rats , they seem disgusting scampering creatures and the image you used to reinforce your poem made me squirm in disgust , so thought the poem very effective.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
I am sorry to say but I hate rats , they seem disgusting scampering creatures and the image you used to reinforce your poem made me squirm in disgust , so thought the poem very effective.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for this contest
with the required 5-7-5 syllables
Pet rats are one thing; wild, often diseased rats
deserve the reputation they have
They did, are all, carry the plague
Matching picture completes the poem
Good luck in the lowku contest
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
This is a fine entry for this contest
with the required 5-7-5 syllables
Pet rats are one thing; wild, often diseased rats
deserve the reputation they have
They did, are all, carry the plague
Matching picture completes the poem
Good luck in the lowku contest
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from Dutchie
Well written, this little poem, Ine. I hate rats too. (who doesn't) When I look at the picture I know why. They are very dangerous, because they cause many diseases.
The rats you're talking about are not dangerous. My granddaughter had one once...
I never heard of the Lowku but I like it. Fia
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
Well written, this little poem, Ine. I hate rats too. (who doesn't) When I look at the picture I know why. They are very dangerous, because they cause many diseases.
The rats you're talking about are not dangerous. My granddaughter had one once...
I never heard of the Lowku but I like it. Fia
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi this is a very intricate subject, having accepted that they bring disease, still some people have a great love for them and other dangerous animals. So could we stop between.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
Hi this is a very intricate subject, having accepted that they bring disease, still some people have a great love for them and other dangerous animals. So could we stop between.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from rjuselius
"Most people hate rats,
consider them dirty beasts,
spreading diseases."
this is true up to a point dear anonymous! i had a rat pet when i was younger and it was nothing like a flilthy pet. but i do get your point.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
"Most people hate rats,
consider them dirty beasts,
spreading diseases."
this is true up to a point dear anonymous! i had a rat pet when i was younger and it was nothing like a flilthy pet. but i do get your point.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from robyn corum
grrrooooossss! Can you think of anything 'LOWER' than a rat to write about? I don't think so! If LOWEST of topics won the prize, you'd probably be a shoo-in! HAHAHA! Good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
grrrooooossss! Can you think of anything 'LOWER' than a rat to write about? I don't think so! If LOWEST of topics won the prize, you'd probably be a shoo-in! HAHAHA! Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymouis. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
I like rats, but maybe not the one in your artwork.
Great lowku poem that brings home the worries many have of rats.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
I like rats, but maybe not the one in your artwork.
Great lowku poem that brings home the worries many have of rats.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with correct line and syllable count. I studied Psych so my two best friends through the college years were white mice that helped me with my behavioral studies - they are really quite intelligent and loving creatures. The rats roaming the streets of NYC, however, are a whole different story LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with correct line and syllable count. I studied Psych so my two best friends through the college years were white mice that helped me with my behavioral studies - they are really quite intelligent and loving creatures. The rats roaming the streets of NYC, however, are a whole different story LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, anonymous.. Have a lovely and blessed weekend.