Comment from SamWrites4you

Good

I really like how this poem is informative, very clever! This piece is also thought provoking as now I am interested in looking into other types of swans out there. I just wish it rhymed a bit more. Nonetheless, it still flowed together nicely. Great job here!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2016

Thanks for your review and comments

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You are taking us to an interest in animals, I hope you are making this into an ABC book of pieces for us to enjoy. Very nicely done .

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016

Whoa Barb What a great and complimentary suggestion. Thank you so much

reply by the author on 21-Dec-2016

Whoa Barb What a great and complimentary suggestion. Thank you so much