Natural Mirror
Introduction14 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi there
Really enjoyed this mirror poem, which read beautifully and what a fantastic finale,
love the twist, very creative and clever.
Couple of nits....second to last line...I'll
Sixth line....should this be twenty years older than me.
Thoroughly enjoyable
Mitchell
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hi there
Really enjoyed this mirror poem, which read beautifully and what a fantastic finale,
love the twist, very creative and clever.
Couple of nits....second to last line...I'll
Sixth line....should this be twenty years older than me.
Thoroughly enjoyable
Mitchell
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Michell, it?s an honor to have your complimentary review. Thank you. I fixed the picks, you are a very astute reader.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Trisha;
Sometimes I just want to smash the mirror. How dare it show that woman in my reflection? What happened to the carefree girl who turned heads everywhere she went? What happened to my waist?
Oh, I know. Time.
Thanks for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hi Trisha;
Sometimes I just want to smash the mirror. How dare it show that woman in my reflection? What happened to the carefree girl who turned heads everywhere she went? What happened to my waist?
Oh, I know. Time.
Thanks for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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I think physical beauty is followed by inner beauty and wisdom (I?m VERY wise) LOL thanks a bunch for your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem of nature's mirror that sometimes can trick us when we see our reflection in the water when it seems we are older than we think or it may be our evil twin.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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A very well-written poem of nature's mirror that sometimes can trick us when we see our reflection in the water when it seems we are older than we think or it may be our evil twin.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Beauty comes from the person inside as well. I thank you for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a fun verse, well done.
Our age and the wrinkles do sneak up on us, it's true.
It's a beautiful picture you chose for your story.
Good luck in the mirror competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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This is a fun verse, well done.
Our age and the wrinkles do sneak up on us, it's true.
It's a beautiful picture you chose for your story.
Good luck in the mirror competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Hello again Sharon, I really appreciate the time you spend reviewing my poems..I?m glad you liked it.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from jenintorre
It certainly is every women's nightmare. Best to not look in the mirror. I enjoyed your poem and could relate to it. Just one thing though the sentence with "really is true" would it not be better to leave the "it" out? Best wishes.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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It certainly is every women's nightmare. Best to not look in the mirror. I enjoyed your poem and could relate to it. Just one thing though the sentence with "really is true" would it not be better to leave the "it" out? Best wishes.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Great catch! You are correct. Thank you so much for that and your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yep! I do not recognise the person in the mirror! I always thought I was younger than that! But it's best just not to look and pretend you look 21 again! He he he, a fun write and I wish you well for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Yep! I do not recognise the person in the mirror! I always thought I was younger than that! But it's best just not to look and pretend you look 21 again! He he he, a fun write and I wish you well for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Hi, Dolly,!. It makes sense to accept yourself outside, I think all the media does not help urging mature women to buy this and that. I am surprised how collagen plays a part. You probably have a lovely Brit skin. I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Ricky1024
mirror mirror on the wall who's mirror poem is going to be the fairest of them all there are many ways to enjoy our Reflection from mirrors to the waters play low but the best way to do it is to look deep inside and self-reflect dr. Ricky 1024 and good luck with this
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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mirror mirror on the wall who's mirror poem is going to be the fairest of them all there are many ways to enjoy our Reflection from mirrors to the waters play low but the best way to do it is to look deep inside and self-reflect dr. Ricky 1024 and good luck with this
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Thanks - wise advice. There is to much emphasis put on exterior, instead of the person inside. Thanks much for reviewing
Have a great day, Trisha
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I think we are all a little surprised no matter the age of what we look like when we look at ourselves in the mirror. If we play our cards right though, every age can be our best. it's how we think of ourselves methinks! Nice write. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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I think we are all a little surprised no matter the age of what we look like when we look at ourselves in the mirror. If we play our cards right though, every age can be our best. it's how we think of ourselves methinks! Nice write. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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I?m with you! The poem does not make the person.. Thanks for reviewing kiwi
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Ryn
Cleaver poem. And I can relate so well. It is so weird as we age we feel young yet when I see my reflection in a window, I think that can't be me. I am a Gemini as well!
Ryn
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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Cleaver poem. And I can relate so well. It is so weird as we age we feel young yet when I see my reflection in a window, I think that can't be me. I am a Gemini as well!
Ryn
Comment Written 12-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016
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How true that is. What date are you, I am on 6th
Comment from RYME4U
This is well written and nicely rhymed. I like the idea of nature's reflector being a lake. The way you have presented this is very attractive, too. Good job!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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This is well written and nicely rhymed. I like the idea of nature's reflector being a lake. The way you have presented this is very attractive, too. Good job!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Thanks for reviewing , and for your positive comments