Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 " Woman"Words to pass on to my children
20 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully. Acrostic is not one of my favorite forms as it usually tends to come across like a poster saying rather than poetry, but you did a great job with this one. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
This meets the contest requirements beautifully. Acrostic is not one of my favorite forms as it usually tends to come across like a poster saying rather than poetry, but you did a great job with this one. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016
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Thanks Monica glad you enjoyed it, Mary
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Us women are just amazing. Men will never understand what we go through and how we tick inside. Yes, they have to deal with us but nothing will ever compare to us. You did a great job with this
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2016
Us women are just amazing. Men will never understand what we go through and how we tick inside. Yes, they have to deal with us but nothing will ever compare to us. You did a great job with this
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2016
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Thank you for your very encouraging review and great comments, Mary
Comment from Irish Rain
I love every line of this. So true, women are connected, cosmically to everything. Love your author notes too, as I've always walked alone, I seldom end up at the mall, ha ha...WONDERFUL acrostic!!! Blessings.....
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
I love every line of this. So true, women are connected, cosmically to everything. Love your author notes too, as I've always walked alone, I seldom end up at the mall, ha ha...WONDERFUL acrostic!!! Blessings.....
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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Thank you for a most encouraging review, I appreciate it. Mary
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You are most welcome Miss Mary!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Great poem. really good use of this difficult style. You have mastered it. I don't know how you do it. I am in awe of your talent.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
Great poem. really good use of this difficult style. You have mastered it. I don't know how you do it. I am in awe of your talent.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much for a kind and generous review, Mary
Comment from RoostyNester
A very nice acrostic poem. The mysteries of a Woman. Your poem was well done in words and verse. I liked the style and the message
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
A very nice acrostic poem. The mysteries of a Woman. Your poem was well done in words and verse. I liked the style and the message
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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Thanks Roosty for your encouraging review and great comments, Mary
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is a great entry for the Acrostic contest. I wish I had a six to give you, as this is most deserving! Great picture and great poem. Very expressive!
Loved "her presence lifts the mundane" and "mysteriously connected to the earth".
I really enjoyed this poem! Best wishes.
Connie
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
This is a great entry for the Acrostic contest. I wish I had a six to give you, as this is most deserving! Great picture and great poem. Very expressive!
Loved "her presence lifts the mundane" and "mysteriously connected to the earth".
I really enjoyed this poem! Best wishes.
Connie
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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Thank you so much Connie, for your generous and encouraging review and considering it exceptional rating. Mary
Comment from frogbook
A wonderful acrostic with such descriptive and original phrasing beautifully paired with the art. I'm not sure if the contest has been voted on but this must have place high or will soon.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
A wonderful acrostic with such descriptive and original phrasing beautifully paired with the art. I'm not sure if the contest has been voted on but this must have place high or will soon.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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Thanks for your excellent review, and high praise for my poem Mary
Comment from Nika2016
Ah...Einstein ..such words..so true..and your words so true..I look at my sister and I see the Earth itself...brown skin..artistic fingers...tasting the food as she cooks..like a gypsy she is..like the woman in your photo...
Beautiful poem...
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
Ah...Einstein ..such words..so true..and your words so true..I look at my sister and I see the Earth itself...brown skin..artistic fingers...tasting the food as she cooks..like a gypsy she is..like the woman in your photo...
Beautiful poem...
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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Thanks for the excellent review, Mary
Comment from Gladys2013
Great acrostic poem! Loved how you made the message not only going down but the first line of the poem, followed by a very insightful, and may I add accurate, description! Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
Great acrostic poem! Loved how you made the message not only going down but the first line of the poem, followed by a very insightful, and may I add accurate, description! Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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I am pleased you enjoyed it, thanks for the excellent review Mary
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for adorning your acrostic with the perfect picture and adding the Einstein quote. I enjoyed your aggrandizing woman and your imagery about the "stars" and "earth"! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
Thank you for adorning your acrostic with the perfect picture and adding the Einstein quote. I enjoyed your aggrandizing woman and your imagery about the "stars" and "earth"! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 09-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2016
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Thank you Joan so much for your exceptional review, I am so glad you enjoyed it. Mary