Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the wife that need some respect and love from her husband and when she finally have the courage to confront him he seems not to even heard what she said.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thanks for the review Sandra, this is an older one that I brought up for air.I know a few women went aha as they read it. Cheers, j

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

And at this point, she shoves the sports section down his throat--
right?? LOL:-) Seriously--this is very well-written and REALISTIC! Some
of them really are from another planet, aren't they?

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thanks for the scarily insightful review ha ha. A few women related to this one, sigh. Have a great holiday, judester

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is not always the support there that women expect or want, I can identify with your words here, it is still a male dominated world, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

I used to complain to pretty much same reaction, and now I get what need from other sources. Makes me stronger! All the best, cheers, j

Comment from jmshumate

Excellent

Very nice poem, you have good ryhmes and flow from beginning to end. The reader hears the feelings and needs of the woman, unfortunately the husband dies not, big problem in marriages today, and probably always has been. We have to hear one another, or problems will occur. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018

Thanks for the insightful review. This was written a while ago as I am going through my poems and revising some.I read poems from years ago and cringe a little, just proving that fanstory improves my writing skills, year by year. Cheers, j

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Excellent

Haha very funny last line, good rhythm
and rhyme,consistent aabb even through last stanza where
you visually shortened line.
Well done, I hope you started the rant from the beginning again!

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016

Thanks for the review Hayley. If men would only realize what a little well timed attention and a loving touch means to women and make a warm home..Happy wife, happy life, cheers, j

reply by Hayley Solomon on 14-Aug-2016

Indeed! :)

Comment from Susan Chetcuti

Exceptional

I had to laugh reading your poem because the words are so true. I knew you put emotion into it because it's through your experience. Loved it, well done.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars. Men just don't seem to realize that a little attention and loving actions go a long way to make a happy home..Happy wife, happy life, cheers, j