Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Ricky1024, you have my interest piqued with this beginning story. Look forward to follow-up on it. I love war and crime stories and am anxious to see where you are going with this one. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts my new daughter.
Izz'A bell a!
Enjoy the rest in about an hour and it is right o'clock!
Ricky 1024.

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 30-Jun-2016

You are so welcome, Ricky1024! Will be reading it soon. God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by Anonymous Member on 04-Jul-2016

You are so welcome, Ricky1024! Will be reading it soon. God bless and hugs, Susanne

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Average

I am sure you are an excellent writer given your accomplishments, but either there is some glitch and the system has not uploaded the entire piece properly, in addition to omitting grammatical punctuation marks and somehow capitalising, or this is so modern that I truly do not understand it. I am a professional author myself in real life, so I do understand that editing can sometimes be an issue, but perhaps double check? Or else you truly have not communicated your intent. (I understand I am probably just an ignoramus.)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks Hayley for stopping by!
First part is now completed. Enjoy.
Ricky 1024

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Short and sweet. Flash script about monsters. Poet believes monsters used ruled the land. Nice surprising remarks about female sharp shooter! How You doing Ricky? liberty justice

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts
on Megan's AIZZY MONSTER!
READ PART ONE NOW!
Ricky and Angie 4 Ever!