Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I am so very sorry for your loss. You have penned a wonderful and heartfelt poem that touches the heart. You used very good wording and very good imagery. May God bless you. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts of My Son Jason and I am honored.Ricky 1024.

Comment from LisaD123

Excellent

This conjures up a lot of emotions in so few words. The rhyme gives the poem a sense of pace and adds to the emotions of the piece. The reader can empathise with you. Take care. Lisa

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts of My Poem.
I will finish it soon.
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Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ricky. My heart goes out to you mate. It is such a tragedy when a young bloke passes away in such a preventable way. I applaud your courage, my friend.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for your review and the thoughts.
But, I just started it.
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reply by Walu Feral on 26-Jun-2016

I thought that may have been the case. I also thought you may have been too sad to continue.

I learned the hard way that sometimes this stupid fanstory posting aparatus doesn't automatically set to "Preview mode" Now I make sure it's preview before I save it. Hope that makes sense. Let me know when you finish and I'll read it mate.

reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks Fez.
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