Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I'm surprised the feet smell would be that bad in a tent considering that you are outdoors. It must have been a hot day and super smelly feet. Can you imagine having to sleep next to it? Gross

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice second part of the week.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Another fascinatingly colorful camping story about a pair of smelly socks in a tent. Then there's the toilet paper too. The whole experience seems very realistic.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

What a cute part of your story this is. I had to laugh at Nikki holding her breath as long as she could and finally finding what the cause of the outrageous smell came from. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work.

Kat

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.

reply by MizKat on 26-Jun-2016

I hope your Sunday is being blessed too. Kat

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Ine, a cute little story about the bad smell in the tent, and then it comes from some socks. Yikes! 'What a smelly socks' should be 'what smelly socks.' A lovely good night tale. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks for the tip.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A cute story about children on a camping trip. The girl is trying to find toilet paper, and has to hunt past her brother's stinky socks to find it. Once she does, she throws them outside and finds the paper she's looking for. All is well as she get to the toilet on time.
Rhonda

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Thank you once again for this delightful write
and putting a smile on my face.
Each time I vision my self with you guys
I can;'t wait for the next surprise.
Have a nice week end.
Cookie

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.

reply by misscookie on 24-Jun-2016

It was my pleasure ,m take care.
Cookie

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Many travelers will steal toilet paper from public toilets. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done Ine, to be cut short without toilet paper is a heinous event indeed, and for Douglas to be wearing the same socks for days could be enough to spoil anybody's party. Well done.Ine, blessings, Roy
Typo : what smell(s) so bad.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend. Thanks for spotting the spello.

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Thanks for spotting the spelling mistake.

reply by royowen on 24-Jun-2016

Most welcome