Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ricky, this just brings tears sweetie...I am so sorry for the loss of Jason...I can't say it enough...I don't even want to think what I would do if I lost a child...my mother lost my brother...it took her heart away...God be with you always...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Thanks
s Linda.
I have learned to deal with the loss of Jay but my wife Carolyn committed suicide only 8 months after Jason's death so..
"Being alone is horrid...
Ricky....

reply by l.raven on 24-Jun-2016

I so sorry Ricky...that is more than any person can deal with...a child alone...and then your wife...I truly don't know what I would have done...and I know what you mean about being alone...I'm sorry...big hugs and kisses sweet boy...love Linda xxoo

Comment from reconciled

Exceptional

Hey Rick...good to see you Bro.
some that shit dont never go away does it...maybe put away for periods...but there part of us now....and changes us. Some say what dont hill ya makes you stronger....I think that guy was stoned or was very young and naive.

I got no fix Bro...if I did I'd give it to you I swear.
I was in several bad car wrecks....two driven by ah invincible teen drug induced disillusion....couple by me when I was in outside sales in Detroit .....I developed a love affair with Valium and fell asleep a lot when I wasn't supposed to. Thank God I never hurt anyone. Glad your here....sorry I havent been around. love to you...michael

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2016

Thanks so much for your review and kind thoughts on my Son Jason.
J- July 14rh1983
Corrine Alexis Smrkovsk
y
Oldest Daughter
A- April19th
1956
My brother Wayne.
S- September 30th1985Dan Alyse Smrkovsky Youngest Daughter
O-October
th,1954
My Birth
N- Novembe5th,1985.
Jason Richard
Smrkovsky
11- 05- 1984~03- 30- 2003
Organs Donated-
04- 01- 2003
(April Fools Day).
But was the joke on me and my family?
Ricky

Comment from Abby Wilson-hand

Excellent

people know who your boy was from me in watkens glen n.y his story hit all the way to me and it seems like your son was amazing

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

BEFORE I AM DONE. .
THE WHOLE WORLD WILL KNOW!!!

reply by Abby Wilson-hand on 21-Jun-2016

yes they will

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ricky. Long time no see mate. I'm so sorry for your tragic loss. Those bloody anti-depressants are extremely dangerous in the wrong hands. Please know that Jason is now safe with the Lord.

Well done penning this my friend.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Hi and rhanks for your review and kibd thoughts fez.
Ricky

Comment from LeannaP

Excellent

"We would later find out that our only Son (Jason Richard Smrkovsky) would have a Heart Attack on the way to the hospital!"
To be Continued this afternoon.

Hi Ricky,
Its been awhile. I enjoyed this line above as it shows
how you can transition without using clauses which can be
distracting or "lose" your readers so to speak.
Nice work!'

leanna

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Hi there Leanna and rhanks for your review and kind thoughts.
Ricky

reply by LeannaP on 21-Jun-2016

your welcome

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Thanks Leonna

reply by Anonymous Member on 23-Jun-2016

your welcome