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ShedMoreTears Fairy Tales@Fables"

Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Incephilitest!"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.

3 total reviews 
Comment from foxangie123
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At the first I think you meant to type feed instead of freed. I would edit that if I were you. Sixth paragraph you put on instead of own. I do that as well. Great subject matter-Sci-fi-ish

 Comment Written 23-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Thanks and I shall correct!
    Ricky 1024.
reply by foxangie123 on 25-May-2016
    Hugs to you friend....
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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This was very interesting and fun to read...light-hearted, yet note-worthy. I enjoyed it very much. Will look forward to next chapter. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 23-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Yes, My "Shed More Tear's Books"
    are fun to write on.
    Ricky 1024.
Comment from Almahar826
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What a cute and nice way to make a childrens book I liked in the beginning the "Miss-understandings" and how it goes on to explain the bats / exterminators and mosquito. Well done!!

 Comment Written 23-May-2016


reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Why thanks and I usually write about one as week.
    Ricky 1024.