"The Book of Jay 1984 to 2003"
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Replacing the Love?"My Son Jason's Life.
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Comment from foxangie123
I can so relate to fat you write as it touches my heart. I am so happy that we crossed one another's paths. I wish you lived close. You are awesome and a very best friend..l
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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I can so relate to fat you write as it touches my heart. I am so happy that we crossed one another's paths. I wish you lived close. You are awesome and a very best friend..l
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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well I wish I met you 40 years ago when I was starting out my life and already on my freakin house instead of having 3 kids and adopting basically to probably have 15 thanks ever so much darling Ricky 1024
Comment from pamelaperron
very touching. you inspired me to thank god for my two children. I feel your pain come through. I wrote a poem of my dad passing whereas I used "how do i go on with half a heart' your poem reminds me of that torment. possible change: was 05 supposed to be 50?...pamela
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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very touching. you inspired me to thank god for my two children. I feel your pain come through. I wrote a poem of my dad passing whereas I used "how do i go on with half a heart' your poem reminds me of that torment. possible change: was 05 supposed to be 50?...pamela
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Sorry about toy dad. Mine too in1972. Thanks Pam. Ricky
Comment from LisaD123
This is an interesting and well-written piece. I enjoyed the repetition and the rhyme. The ideas and structure are both excellent. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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This is an interesting and well-written piece. I enjoyed the repetition and the rhyme. The ideas and structure are both excellent. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Well.
Qhat an hobor Miss Kisa!
Thanks forever for rhis ..
My new Friend!. Ricky1024.