Christine's Poems
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Comment from I am Cat
well... for seven words or less... (or is it fewer?)
I'm never sure there are actually considered 'poems'... but hey, it won you money, right? So yeah... call it what you want. and it made me smile. lol Mwah!
well done
Cat
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
well... for seven words or less... (or is it fewer?)
I'm never sure there are actually considered 'poems'... but hey, it won you money, right? So yeah... call it what you want. and it made me smile. lol Mwah!
well done
Cat
Comment Written 22-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2016
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Hi Cat, Yes it made me smile too. It is what it is LOL thanks for reading I promise to make my next one longer. I have just enrolled in a poetry online course through distance learning and looking forward to actually learning about all the different things associated with poetry .I have written stuff all my life and love creating stories through the art of poetry. So I wonder if the 7 words will constituteca poem LOl . But I have had terrific response to this one and appreciate all the support given to me here. Have a good one and heres a smile to you 😀😀 Cheers Christine
Comment from Kaydoe
I can see why this won. There may be only 7 words but they say a lot. More
people need to take that advice. A smile goes a long way to lift one's spirit. Well done!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
I can see why this won. There may be only 7 words but they say a lot. More
people need to take that advice. A smile goes a long way to lift one's spirit. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Hi Kaydoe, The message is louder than the prize, but I am pleased with this win and Thank you very much dor reading so sending you a big smile and have a great day Cheers Christine😀
Comment from Janet Foor
Congratulations! "A smile is free" is an excellent seven word poem. Sweet picture to compliment you well chosen words. Well done. A joy to read.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
Congratulations! "A smile is free" is an excellent seven word poem. Sweet picture to compliment you well chosen words. Well done. A joy to read.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Hi Janet, Thank you very much for having a read and for your lovey words. A smile coming your way appreciate your review Cheers Christine😀
Comment from c_lucas
Congratulations on your win. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
Congratulations on your win. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
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Hi c lucas, Thank you so much for your congratulations .and for reading my poem . I enjoyed the challenge of finding 7 words and I try to live up to the message it gives. A smile I send to you also Cheers Christine😀
Comment from VaV-VOOM
Beautiful poem my friend, I love the picture also. Keep writing these beautiful poems, and thank you for sharing we us. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
Beautiful poem my friend, I love the picture also. Keep writing these beautiful poems, and thank you for sharing we us. Write On! VaV-VOOM!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hi VaV-VOOM . Thank you so mich for your lovely review and I will try to keep writing good ones A big smile comes your way Cheers Christine😃
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Your so welcome, VaV-VOOM!
Comment from Senyai
Congrats, Chrissy! Aww... this one was cute and true. Seven words that we should keep close to our hearts. Brightens lives :)
Glad you won, you deserved it.
Have a great week and weekend,
Senyai
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
Congrats, Chrissy! Aww... this one was cute and true. Seven words that we should keep close to our hearts. Brightens lives :)
Glad you won, you deserved it.
Have a great week and weekend,
Senyai
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hi Senyai, Thank you very much for your congratulations and sending you a big smile .I have this now up in office wall also Cheers Christine 😃
Comment from Kazzawin
.....and a very encouraging thought!
It takes 7 words to say it and just one small action to do it!!
As a child I remember people smiled more....we are all so bogged down with the pace of life that we often forget to interact with our fellow human beings!
A lovely little poem with a big message : )
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
.....and a very encouraging thought!
It takes 7 words to say it and just one small action to do it!!
As a child I remember people smiled more....we are all so bogged down with the pace of life that we often forget to interact with our fellow human beings!
A lovely little poem with a big message : )
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hi Kazzawin 8 am very pleased you thought these 7 words says a lot and yes a smile is nice to receive as well as give so I send you one for your comments . Many Cheers Christine😀
Comment from BruceMiller
You certainly have created quite an interesting little poem here. It could very well be the winner in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
You certainly have created quite an interesting little poem here. It could very well be the winner in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hi Bruce, Thank you for your review and lovely words re my 7 words ( I am pleased with my win so thanks for that ) I am smiling and send you one too. Cheers Christine😃
Comment from sage17611
This is a cute poem with a good message, I couldn't help but smile when I read it. The picture is a good depiction of the poem. This is well written, I really enjoyed reading this poem, good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
This is a cute poem with a good message, I couldn't help but smile when I read it. The picture is a good depiction of the poem. This is well written, I really enjoyed reading this poem, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hi sage17611 I am glad I made you smile and I send another one to you also. Thanks for reading my 7 words and have just found out it won the contest so my smile is very big LOL Many Cheers Christine😃
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Hi sage17611 I am glad I made you smile and I send another one to you also. Thanks for reading my 7 words and have just found out it won the contest so my smile is very big LOL Many Cheers Christine😃
Comment from fastdigits
Such a truism you have penned in
but seven words, telling of the feelings
that a simple smile can have and the
effects are so lasting
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
Such a truism you have penned in
but seven words, telling of the feelings
that a simple smile can have and the
effects are so lasting
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
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Hi fastdigits ( love your user name) Thanks for reading and reviewing my 7 words and yes a smile is easy to give and recieve. Thanks for you good luck wishes it worked as I just found out it won. so now my smile has increased but what fun to try these contests anyway. Cheers Christine😃