Comment from thonnigford09

Excellent

I really liked this poem. This was actually creative and excellent. I would recommend it and good luck in the contest. In making this creative poem, the creativity was erased in the end and was a good choice for the contest. Thanks.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thanks for the great review.

reply by thonnigford09 on 16-Apr-2016

Thanks!!:)

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

I should think there would be few entries that beat this one, for cleverness and a rather sarcastic-sounding 'voice' anyway! LOL. In tiny poems like this, word choices become vital - 'lackluster' is perfect for what was required by this prompt. :))

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thanks for the great review, Dawn

reply by Dawn Munro on 15-Apr-2016

You're very welcome.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I see you've been to my poem portfolio then - LOL.

A lack of imagination is a horrible thing. I never erase mine though. I revisit them and wet myself laughing at how bad they are.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thanks for the kind review. Glad it ave you a chuckle.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Thanks for entering my contest, DALLAS.

I really like your theme in that imagery is a must in writing poetry. Very well put in word economy.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray. xx

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thanks for the kind review.,

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Alice. It's good to see somebody getting back to basics without a bunch of frills. Just nice clean poetry. Amen. Good for you. I wish you the best of luck with the contest. I know you will get many entries. Bob

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thank, Bob. Appreciate the review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Ouch! What a compelling use of a "eraser"! You created such an apt response to the unusual prompt, but still managed to include alliteration and insight in a tiny 5-7-5. Best wishes in the competition and happy weekend- Joan

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Came close. Thanks for the great review.

reply by Joan E. on 15-Apr-2016

I'm glad your work was well recognized. Sweet dreams- Joan

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

Your theme is yawn but your poem is not a yawn, in fact it's funny and wise. How many times have we as writers put words on paper that were dull and ordinary yet we somehow think them important. I'll keep your eraser in mind when I proofread my work.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thanks for the kind review.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

No yawn for this! I'd like to cut and paste it as a reply to some of the poems posted on this site. Every word is this short work counts. Lackluster is a delightful way to say boring. LOL

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2016

Thanks for the great review. A little late with my replies.

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

This is a clever entry for the contest. Your term "Eraser" pretty much says it all! I also like "lackluster".

Well done. Good luck in the contest!

bichonfrisegirl aka Connie

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

Thank you for reviewing.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A great lack of imagination. It wins the prize that is an eraser. Wipe out this lack of color and inspiration. Don't feel offended, I think you did exactly what the prompt said. Good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016

thanks for the kind review.