Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Many parents who have lost children can relate to your words and the strong feelings that come through your poetic form. There is strength in your words and poetic form.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2016

thank you I really appreciate your kind thoughts and words Ricky 1024

Comment from BruceMiller

Excellent

Ah, Ricky1024... I am never surprised when I see you name on a posting. The writing quality I expect is always there. Cheers.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

thanks for your kind words Blues much appreciated it after 13 years of doing this I guess I might have finally gotten it down pat Ricky 1024

Comment from Jay Squires

Exceptional

Another heart-wrenching chapter in a story that no parent should have to endure. The frequent echoing of Me WITHOUT You is very effective, Ricky, which effectively brings the horror of your memories to the forefront of the reader's mind, even at the expense of your own serenity. God Bless.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2016

use your gift for your kindness on this review your name j can be spelled with AJ Jay Jayson or the way I spell my son's name Jason which stands for these five special months Jay July 14th for rent Alexis my first born daughter April the birth of my oldest stepdaughter a September 30th 1985 the first of my last daughter Dana Lee who was born with the cord around her neck thank God I was smart enough to realize it October 24th 1954 May 1st and lastly but not the least November and 5th 1984 Jason Richard SMR KO vs KY who still exist today in three people's bodies amazingly enough two I've communicated to the third I've written to and she has not communicated that she is now my sister because what is inside of her as a by-product heavenly father and his son Jesus Christ and my wife God bless her soul who committed suicide 8 months after Jason's death Carolyn Ricky 1024