Comment from KJCWWF

Good

I enjoyed this. I could definitely feel the emotion coming from it. However, the tenses do switch at times. The repetition of the word "not" is a bit much for me. I loved it at the beginning though. Nice writing, overall.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2016

thanks for your time and review kjc WWF is the WWF in regard to the wrestling industry

reply by KJCWWF on 29-Mar-2016

No, actually the letters are random. I just needed a username that no one else would use, and no one really uses that exact username.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

We share much of the same story history with our childten so it is tough for me and so very heart wrenching. Ypu did a great job hte.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016

thanks Angie I can't promote this piece or any other future pieces because I've been blocked for banned from viewing anybody to work even yours because Tom's a cruel bastard and this is the 5th time you screw me over because I defend my work I'm not going to accept a 2 star review on my pieces I dedicate to my son because the person that idiot doesn't believe my stories are true to anybody that reviews my work and I have opposing few days I'm so pissed I will tell them that complain the sitcom the administrator here for the b******* and he does the rank Riders thank you so much darling have a nice evening