Tulip Time
Largest Festival in Michigan49 total reviews
Comment from Ekim777
The challenge is to create some mystery out of the beauty of your poetry. Your sparse three lines perhaps lack this element of beauty. In prose we need some fine lines. In poetry, every line must be fine.-Ekim777
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The challenge is to create some mystery out of the beauty of your poetry. Your sparse three lines perhaps lack this element of beauty. In prose we need some fine lines. In poetry, every line must be fine.-Ekim777
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from GWHARGIS
Fun lune. Good syllable count. I can only imagine the breathtaking beauty of miles of tulips. You've done an outstanding job on your poem. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
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Fun lune. Good syllable count. I can only imagine the breathtaking beauty of miles of tulips. You've done an outstanding job on your poem. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
This sounds so beautiful. Tulips in bloom reveal the beauty of spring. When I had my home, I always had tulips in my flower garden. I miss that garden because now I live in a senior complex with any space to plant tulips, roses and daffodils.
This is an excellent contest entry with a beautiful photo of these tulips to enhance your line poem. I wish you good luck in this contest.
Happy Easter to you and yours.
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This sounds so beautiful. Tulips in bloom reveal the beauty of spring. When I had my home, I always had tulips in my flower garden. I miss that garden because now I live in a senior complex with any space to plant tulips, roses and daffodils.
This is an excellent contest entry with a beautiful photo of these tulips to enhance your line poem. I wish you good luck in this contest.
Happy Easter to you and yours.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from Ulla
Wonderful with great imagery created in so few lines. Tulips are one of my favorite flowers. At the moment they are in full flower here. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla
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Wonderful with great imagery created in so few lines. Tulips are one of my favorite flowers. At the moment they are in full flower here. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from dmt1967
I like the picture of the flower blooming. The words were good as well. I find it hard reviewing these short poems but you seem to have covered all the bases with this poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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I like the picture of the flower blooming. The words were good as well. I find it hard reviewing these short poems but you seem to have covered all the bases with this poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from RGstar
I have heard of this, but never seen it...must be a sight to behold. Sometimes when something beautiful is seen, time stops and one wonders what part one plays in the beauty of being. Its then we realize how insignificant we really are in comparison with the rest of nature.
Best wishes and good luck in the competition.
RGstar
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I have heard of this, but never seen it...must be a sight to behold. Sometimes when something beautiful is seen, time stops and one wonders what part one plays in the beauty of being. Its then we realize how insignificant we really are in comparison with the rest of nature.
Best wishes and good luck in the competition.
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from closetpoetjester
Wow, five miles of lanes packed with tulips, what a sight to behold indeed. As well as the rose I think the tulip is up there as far as an absolute favourite goes...such a graceful slender flower, yet strong enough to hold it's own. Fields of these flowers are quite intoxicating to look at...your poem summed up the feeling they give off...your festival was certainly heaven's scent! Well done.
Cheers P
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Wow, five miles of lanes packed with tulips, what a sight to behold indeed. As well as the rose I think the tulip is up there as far as an absolute favourite goes...such a graceful slender flower, yet strong enough to hold it's own. Fields of these flowers are quite intoxicating to look at...your poem summed up the feeling they give off...your festival was certainly heaven's scent! Well done.
Cheers P
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from michaelcahill
You chose your words well here and that is the purpose of the lune. A picture unfolds and entices the reader in to the images you paint. It must be quite the sight. It sounds unreal almost, lanes of tulips stretching out as far as the eye can see. WOW. Great entry. I think this is what the judges will be looking for. mikey
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You chose your words well here and that is the purpose of the lune. A picture unfolds and entices the reader in to the images you paint. It must be quite the sight. It sounds unreal almost, lanes of tulips stretching out as far as the eye can see. WOW. Great entry. I think this is what the judges will be looking for. mikey
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from judester
I just love flowers farms with lanes of color and such a beautiful scent in the air. The sure sign that spring is in the air. Good luck with the contest, cheers, judester
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I just love flowers farms with lanes of color and such a beautiful scent in the air. The sure sign that spring is in the air. Good luck with the contest, cheers, judester
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
Comment from melyuki
Hi Johngie thanks for sharing this delightful little verse that brings tulips alive.. "Lovely lanes" . brings an image to mind of how spectacular the sight must be. The picture truly sets the poem alight.. thanks for the journey and best of luck in the contest. cheers melx
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Hi Johngie thanks for sharing this delightful little verse that brings tulips alive.. "Lovely lanes" . brings an image to mind of how spectacular the sight must be. The picture truly sets the poem alight.. thanks for the journey and best of luck in the contest. cheers melx
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016