wanderlust
a lune poem3 total reviews
Comment from edieas
I like this a lot. The word "some" doesn't seem to belong there in that the rest of the poem is so succinct. Presents a good image. Well thought out. Good luck. edieas
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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I like this a lot. The word "some" doesn't seem to belong there in that the rest of the poem is so succinct. Presents a good image. Well thought out. Good luck. edieas
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Thanks for the review,yeah maybe I will replace some for abetter word.Cheers, j
Comment from Writer8264
Great job on following the guidelines! I like how you rhymed also. The picture is very beautiful and fitting for your poem. What does wanderlust mean? Couldn't figure it out. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Great job on following the guidelines! I like how you rhymed also. The picture is very beautiful and fitting for your poem. What does wanderlust mean? Couldn't figure it out. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Wanderlust is a strong desire to travel. Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from Kaydoe
Lovely expressed Lune Poem. The criteria for a 5-3-5 poem has been met.
Good luck with the contest. I like the unique picture and goes well with the poem.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Lovely expressed Lune Poem. The criteria for a 5-3-5 poem has been met.
Good luck with the contest. I like the unique picture and goes well with the poem.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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Thanks for the review and welcome to fanstory. Angelheart is my favorite artist from fanart.Cheers,j