A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Raw"Assorted poems of love
27 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Now, this..., THIS ... I could relate to, Missy.
If there's anyone out there who thinks for one moment that a bad experience with a relationship can't change them in some way, then they've never had a bad experience in a relationship.
It can...
It will...
and it most definitely does.
Awesome poem.
The music, the message...all of it.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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Now, this..., THIS ... I could relate to, Missy.
If there's anyone out there who thinks for one moment that a bad experience with a relationship can't change them in some way, then they've never had a bad experience in a relationship.
It can...
It will...
and it most definitely does.
Awesome poem.
The music, the message...all of it.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2016
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I am sooooo glad you felt the raw power of this. Love will make some people do things they never in a million years would ever think of doing!!!
You are "THE MAN" Mr. Kuch!!
Your biggest fan,
Missy
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It was entirely my pleasure, Missy.
You're more 'n' welcome.
~Dean :}
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Check your email, please!
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Okey doke, Missy. Will do... :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Missy
= This is a great Ekphrastic.
= I'll have to read Fastdigits now.
= Love the way you formatted this for more impact of your words.
= Great job!
= I apologize for my late response.
= Took a few days off for my birthday, and Tom's aunt't 90th!
= Had a blast in California, but in NO hurry to go back to that rat race!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down (*_*)
Jacqueline (Jax) M Franklin
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Hi, Missy
= This is a great Ekphrastic.
= I'll have to read Fastdigits now.
= Love the way you formatted this for more impact of your words.
= Great job!
= I apologize for my late response.
= Took a few days off for my birthday, and Tom's aunt't 90th!
= Had a blast in California, but in NO hurry to go back to that rat race!
(*>*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down (*_*)
Jacqueline (Jax) M Franklin
Comment Written 24-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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I am so sorry I have taken this long to reply my friend. First, my hubby was sick and now I have the crud.
Thank you for this lovely review, sweetie. I hope you enjoyed your mini vaca.
Missy
Comment from michaelcahill
Geez. Just a poem right? I didn't say anything, did I? Four star review? :))
Great stuff, Missy. Love the presentation and these ladies who seem to want me for some reason. I like the girl who wants to put a spell on me, she's been successful in her quest. Good to see you posting. mikey
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Geez. Just a poem right? I didn't say anything, did I? Four star review? :))
Great stuff, Missy. Love the presentation and these ladies who seem to want me for some reason. I like the girl who wants to put a spell on me, she's been successful in her quest. Good to see you posting. mikey
Comment Written 23-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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That would be me, Mikey!!
Thanks hon for leaving this smile in my face :)
Missy
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Excellently penned! Great artwork. Loved the music too.
You bring to life with words the meaning of "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned." Tread lightly indeed. Wouldn't want to mess with your guy! LOL
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Excellently penned! Great artwork. Loved the music too.
You bring to life with words the meaning of "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned." Tread lightly indeed. Wouldn't want to mess with your guy! LOL
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Happy Easter, GLG!
I will tell you same as I told Jax, I apologize for the lengthy time for this reply. First, my hubby was ill ...now I have the crud.
I really appreciate you leaving this review , hon. I don't think you got any FS money for leaving it though. :(
I will make it up somehow :)
Missy
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Didn't know you were married! LOL
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Yes, almost 10 years.
Comment from Teri7
you did a great job on this poem. You used very good descriptive wording and I saw this art work on someone else's page and read it. Great job you have done. hugs, teri
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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you did a great job on this poem. You used very good descriptive wording and I saw this art work on someone else's page and read it. Great job you have done. hugs, teri
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2016
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My friend Fastdigits :) It was a challenge I ask him to do with me :)
Thank you for this wonderful review!
Missy
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Missy. Whew! I want to be the one on the opposite side in this situation.
She sounds pissed! Or is it a he? LOL (effective writing all the way)
"Now
Envy
Has taken
Root
Envy
Of her looks"
Envy is one of the original seven sins. Good job, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Hi, Missy. Whew! I want to be the one on the opposite side in this situation.
She sounds pissed! Or is it a he? LOL (effective writing all the way)
"Now
Envy
Has taken
Root
Envy
Of her looks"
Envy is one of the original seven sins. Good job, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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I think I have felt all of the original sins at some point, Bob :)
Thank you so much for taking the time from your busy schedule to R&R this for me :)
Happy Easter, hon.
Missy
Comment from mfowler
Ooh, no sweetness and desperation here, just callous, downright envy. The mood is very strong and enhanced by your varied word positions and text presentation. I like this cut-down version of your poetry here. Your words say exactly what you mean and become an imperative, a warning that a panther's on the prowl. The economy of word really suits the style of poem you are clearly trying to achieve. Only one thing could improve it. I'd remove the space between 'Spawned' and 'Jealousy'. i think they have more impact together.
Good poem with a change of flavour.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Ooh, no sweetness and desperation here, just callous, downright envy. The mood is very strong and enhanced by your varied word positions and text presentation. I like this cut-down version of your poetry here. Your words say exactly what you mean and become an imperative, a warning that a panther's on the prowl. The economy of word really suits the style of poem you are clearly trying to achieve. Only one thing could improve it. I'd remove the space between 'Spawned' and 'Jealousy'. i think they have more impact together.
Good poem with a change of flavour.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Pardon, my lateness with this reply, Mark. I have had my hands full here with a sick husband. Now, it seems it is my turn :(
I did as you suggested and it reads much better, thank you!
Thanks again for spending a tiny portion of your time with me :)
Missy
Happy Easter, Mark
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very seductive and romantic Poem Photos are sexy and dramatize
theme of poem. Character lour for vengeance and vert jealous of other woman. liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Very seductive and romantic Poem Photos are sexy and dramatize
theme of poem. Character lour for vengeance and vert jealous of other woman. liberty justice
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Thanks LJ, I really appreciate this and I also apologize for the tardiness of the reply :)
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
Woo, Woo! Smoke coming out of my ears. I won't ever look at trees the same way in the future. Rubbing the bark, in rut, wandering aimlessly, soon to be the victim. Now, shame on you, get your mind out of the gutter. I'm just an old buck deer, searching. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Woo, Woo! Smoke coming out of my ears. I won't ever look at trees the same way in the future. Rubbing the bark, in rut, wandering aimlessly, soon to be the victim. Now, shame on you, get your mind out of the gutter. I'm just an old buck deer, searching. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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I read this and laughed...love ya!!
Thanks for this...sure brightened my day!
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
I read the other poem by fastdigits. Yours and his are different, and yet, the same. The gorgeous woman in the image is the enticement and the threat. There will always be that push/pull in relationships. I think your dual poems point that out. Interesting pair of poems which I enjoyed reading. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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I read the other poem by fastdigits. Yours and his are different, and yet, the same. The gorgeous woman in the image is the enticement and the threat. There will always be that push/pull in relationships. I think your dual poems point that out. Interesting pair of poems which I enjoyed reading. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2016
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Marilyn, first I want to apologize for the tardiness of this reply. Sickness running my house to the ground. :(
But, I really want to thank you for being one of my fans who's name I always see in reviews!! This was a really nice one from you.
Happy Easter
Missy
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Hi Missy. You're welcome. I hope everyone if better now. :) Marilyn