Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Shirley, the moon at night...is much like the sun in the day...very well written Rispetto poem sweet one...I love your poem...and the perfect picture...very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016

Thanks Linda.
:-) Shirley

reply by l.raven on 07-Mar-2016

you are so welcome Shirley...love ya xxoo smiling back at ya...

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

An outstanding Rispetto formatted poem that captures the moonlight while exciting the sailors down below. Good rhyming choices. You shed the tinge of a lovely glow. I enjoyed it,

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016

Thank you so much.
I appreciate it.
:-) Shirley

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

This is an excellent rispetto Shirley . I usually don't review a post that doesn't pay, but since it is you. LOL You adhered to the form with great meter and rhyme. Your abab ccdd rhyme is perfect. Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016

Thanks Nancy.
Your support without due reward is much appreciated.
:-) Shirley

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine Rispetto
True to the form
with the correct rhyme pattern
and nice imagery of the moonlight
Not sure it's iambic with "bright moonlight"
Excellent picture and presentation
reproducing the moonlight
Nicely done

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016

Thanks for your review.
I appreciate your time.
:-) Shirley

Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

Hi,
This is a very well written rispetto with good rhyming. I also enjoyed internal rhymes like moonlight, night, highlight, light etc.,. Beautifully crafted and imagery of moons, clouds and sea is quite good. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

Thank you for a lovely review.
I truly appreciate it.
:-) Shirley