Wings Of Love
Will embrace You3 total reviews
Comment from DarriaStevens82
Such a simple sentiment but so true. It made me feel comforted. The rhyme scheme was good but it really didn't paint any pictures for me...it was all about the emotion. Still very good!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Such a simple sentiment but so true. It made me feel comforted. The rhyme scheme was good but it really didn't paint any pictures for me...it was all about the emotion. Still very good!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Thank you
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Parisjean, this is a good short poem of positivity. I enjoyed it but do feel it needs slight improvement as I feel it did not flow as smoothly as it could. Perhaps consider the following for an example:
Yesterday is the message
That only tomorrow brings
So treasure today's lesson
Safe in angels loving wings
I hope you don't mind my input - food for thought ~ DD
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Parisjean, this is a good short poem of positivity. I enjoyed it but do feel it needs slight improvement as I feel it did not flow as smoothly as it could. Perhaps consider the following for an example:
Yesterday is the message
That only tomorrow brings
So treasure today's lesson
Safe in angels loving wings
I hope you don't mind my input - food for thought ~ DD
Comment Written 24-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Thank you
Comment from foxangie123
From the picture to the words you scripted beneath are gorgeous, pretty, hopeful, insightful, inspiring, warm kisses for any person who reads. Kudos to you....
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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From the picture to the words you scripted beneath are gorgeous, pretty, hopeful, insightful, inspiring, warm kisses for any person who reads. Kudos to you....
Comment Written 24-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Thank you