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All Who Are Weary

Christ freely gave His life.

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Comment from TallySally
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So good to check back in with you.

This is a great poem. Christianity in a nutshell. Sound theology. Teaching with out preaching.

Really nice read.

God bless and my best,
Relda

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2016

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
    Release,
    Thanks for the read and review. I greatly appreciate it. God bless.
Comment from logan3m
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A very uplifting poem. I love the way it flows and explains how God loved us and what He did for us. Keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016
    Thanks Andrew. I appreciate it. God bless. All glory to God.
Comment from heyjude
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Lance, very well done. I like the red background color to
remind us Christ shed His blood for us. God gave us an
instruction book so we would know how to live and we
need to read it and realize His love for us.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
    Judith,
    Thank you for the read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I pray it touches others as well. All glory to God for allowing me to write. God bless.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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There is no greater love than the live of God. No one on earth can offer you His love and give his son tp die for your sins. Only He can give you rest.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
    Amen Sandra. I'm glad it touched you. I pray it touches others as well. All glory to God for allowing me to write. God bless.
Comment from I am Cat
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Come home... come home
ye who are weary
come hoooome

Softly and tenderly
Jesus is calling
Calling... O Sinner, come home

;)
that's what I thought when I saw you title.. I used to sing it in church
all the time. hymns which bring comfort... used to. ;) I guess they still
do, in the right setting.
anyway, now I will go read the poem. LOL Just wanted to write down what
your title made me think... ;)

Your poem speaks of salvation and redemption and a loving savior.
it speaks in simple terms so all can understand.
You say it well, and except for punctuation in this line:

My death gave(,) to all(,) redemption

I have no changes.

I think this is probably the most gentle religious poem I've read Lance, I thank you for that.

Love and laughter to you,
Cat

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2016
    Cat,
    Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad it brought comfort. I pray it does for others as well. All glory to God for the ability to write. God bless my friend.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Lance,

I just love reading your poetry as you are so great at writing it. This is a beautiful poem from beginning to end. I also liked the scriptures you put with it too. I always look forward to reading your work.

Kat

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2016
    Thank you Kat. I always appreciate your reviews. God bless.
reply by MizKat on 23-Feb-2016
    I always love reading your work.
Comment from MelB
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Absolutely beautiful! You have summed up Christ's love and shown that it is a free gift. Flows well with very nice abab rhyme and rhythm. Love the red flowing down the hill in the artwork.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
    Mel,
    Thank you for the kind review. I pray it touches others. All glory to God for the gift of writing. God bless.
reply by MelB on 22-Feb-2016
    You're welcome. I pray it does also. Blessings to you!
reply by Anonymous Member on 22-Feb-2016
    You're welcome. I pray it does also. Blessings to you!
Comment from patcelaw
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Lance, it is such a blessing to know when we are weary and laden with cares, that we can take all this cares to Jesus and He will give us rest. Blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
    Patricia,
    Yes ma'am it is. Thanks for the kind review. I pray it touches others. God bless.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a well written poem of faith and salvation.
It reads smoothly with good word choices.
Image and presentation go well with your words.
Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
    Marilyn,
    Thank you for your kind words. I pray it touches others. All glory to God. God bless.
Comment from pattipac
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Lance, your poem based on John 3:16, may well be what someone searching for purpose and/or deliverance needs today. You tell the who, what, and how of Christ's way of salvation for mankind.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
    Patti,
    Thank you for your kind words. I pray it does touch others. All glory to God. God bless.