A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Keys"Assorted poems of love
37 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I had just received a new computer and by time I learned and still learning how to use it the deadline had passed
Praise God I made the water spray one.
I enjoyed reading your poem I could vision the music playing as I'm reading.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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I had just received a new computer and by time I learned and still learning how to use it the deadline had passed
Praise God I made the water spray one.
I enjoyed reading your poem I could vision the music playing as I'm reading.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 19-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2016
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Hi Miss Cookie, I am so far behind it's not funny, so don't worry about being a lil late for any reason. To me at least :)
Thanks for leaving this for me. I appreciate this very much.
Missy
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Your very welcome, it was my pleasure.
have a nice day.
Cookie
Comment from Teri7
This is a great poem you have done for the contest. It sounds like fun to be involved with that. I may try it soon. Great job my friend. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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This is a great poem you have done for the contest. It sounds like fun to be involved with that. I may try it soon. Great job my friend. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 08-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Thanks Teri, you should join. It is a great group of writers and really helps getting your works seen by more writers.
Missy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
Phewwww... finally made it back... so I went through and read the both again a couple of times to see which one I was going to give the exceptional to... well, both are beautiful and hold deep sentiment... they both read well in tempered meter... but you know me... I'm a sucker for romance... and this one ticks all the right boxes.
An instrument such as the heart played by someone with desire and matching heart makes such sweet and harmonic tunes.
Well I guess you already know by the comments who received the nod for this challenge... a stunning presentation and a truly beautiful read.
With our thoughts we create,
rhythm of time,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Hi Missy,
Phewwww... finally made it back... so I went through and read the both again a couple of times to see which one I was going to give the exceptional to... well, both are beautiful and hold deep sentiment... they both read well in tempered meter... but you know me... I'm a sucker for romance... and this one ticks all the right boxes.
An instrument such as the heart played by someone with desire and matching heart makes such sweet and harmonic tunes.
Well I guess you already know by the comments who received the nod for this challenge... a stunning presentation and a truly beautiful read.
With our thoughts we create,
rhythm of time,
James vx's.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Thank you, James. You have a way of making me feel even with a mediocre poem that I hit it :)
Missy
Comment from pbroussard209
wow, this picture inspired two poems in you, that's awesome. Thanks for sharing both of them. They are both so different, this one I think, carries your voice more, it is written more in the style of romance and love that I have come to enjoy in your writing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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wow, this picture inspired two poems in you, that's awesome. Thanks for sharing both of them. They are both so different, this one I think, carries your voice more, it is written more in the style of romance and love that I have come to enjoy in your writing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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I want to thank you for always being a reviewer of my work, sweetie. Not up to snuff this last week, so sorry for the very late response.
Missy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Lovely interpretation of this picture, my friend. Music is one of the nicest things to have in our lives, it wakes us from the inside out. A pleasure to read! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Lovely interpretation of this picture, my friend. Music is one of the nicest things to have in our lives, it wakes us from the inside out. A pleasure to read! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Good morning, Sandra. First I want to apologize for taking so long to respond. Not feeling to well for a week now. Now, thank you for reading and reviewing my work :) I do appreciate it.
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Missy. Your poem is what we all long for in love. It turns humdrum lives into something to treasure. Nicely written in three separate thoughts: softly, exciting, everlasting. Thank you for contributing the gorgeous image for this post.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Hi Missy. Your poem is what we all long for in love. It turns humdrum lives into something to treasure. Nicely written in three separate thoughts: softly, exciting, everlasting. Thank you for contributing the gorgeous image for this post.
Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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I love this review, thank you so much.
Missy
Comment from l.raven
Hi Missy, this is just beautiful...so very touching...love...love poems...love most beautiful when felt through the heart...so very nicely written sweet girl...Luff Linda xxoo love
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Hi Missy, this is just beautiful...so very touching...love...love poems...love most beautiful when felt through the heart...so very nicely written sweet girl...Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Hi sugga, thanks for taking your time and reading and reviewing my contribution to the challenge. Not feeling to spiffy at the moment.
Missy
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Hi sweetie, I am so sorry your not feeling so well...please take care...and you are so welcome...luff xxoo
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
New music written on our hearts
Let it be
Everlasting
this is so apt for your lovely artwork, my friend.
it's amazing how different each members poem is -
most enjoyable.
Margaret
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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New music written on our hearts
Let it be
Everlasting
this is so apt for your lovely artwork, my friend.
it's amazing how different each members poem is -
most enjoyable.
Margaret
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2016
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Hello, Margaret. Thank you for this review. I hope your time off is not getting boring for ya :)
Missy
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I'm never bored, Missy - have so much editing to do and, of course, I'm recovering from having more stents inserted into blocked arteries on Friday - am gradually feeling better. smile. M
Comment from amada
Great addition to the Picture This contest. Wonderful concentration in the keys of that piano. Your words are soft like if wanting to play those notes. A pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Great addition to the Picture This contest. Wonderful concentration in the keys of that piano. Your words are soft like if wanting to play those notes. A pleasure to read.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
Comment from I am Cat
Missy,
I absolutely love this choice of artwork. To me, it's the most inspiring and most beautiful piece we've had so far, and I thank you! I've had it as the screensaver on my iphone since it was sent to us... I like to carry them around with me and look at them... and I have to say, this one makes me very happy. ;)
That being said, I really like your poem... it's simplicity is lovely...
I especially like the part about :
tickling the keys of my heart softly... so pretty
If I can make a slight suggestion... when you 'frame' a photo... and cut the mat, etc... and put it within the frame, the artist will leave more room (or border) at the bottom of the artwork.... it stabilizes the piece, ... gives it a foundation... I think that would help this piece as well, to 'bottom out' ;)
also, because of the brown background, the yellow font ends up looking almost greenish in tint... if you changed it to a more golden tone, it would match a bit better to the art and give a more golden glow, or amber feel, instead of the almost florescent hue it takes on now. ;)
Just some suggestions, and I certainly know it's your work. I hope you don't take offense.
Sending hugs, love and laughter,
Cat
Again, thanks so much for this beautiful, inspiring work!
Cat
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Missy,
I absolutely love this choice of artwork. To me, it's the most inspiring and most beautiful piece we've had so far, and I thank you! I've had it as the screensaver on my iphone since it was sent to us... I like to carry them around with me and look at them... and I have to say, this one makes me very happy. ;)
That being said, I really like your poem... it's simplicity is lovely...
I especially like the part about :
tickling the keys of my heart softly... so pretty
If I can make a slight suggestion... when you 'frame' a photo... and cut the mat, etc... and put it within the frame, the artist will leave more room (or border) at the bottom of the artwork.... it stabilizes the piece, ... gives it a foundation... I think that would help this piece as well, to 'bottom out' ;)
also, because of the brown background, the yellow font ends up looking almost greenish in tint... if you changed it to a more golden tone, it would match a bit better to the art and give a more golden glow, or amber feel, instead of the almost florescent hue it takes on now. ;)
Just some suggestions, and I certainly know it's your work. I hope you don't take offense.
Sending hugs, love and laughter,
Cat
Again, thanks so much for this beautiful, inspiring work!
Cat
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy