The New Year 2016 Awakens
Many New Year goal resolutions echoes. Yet...5 total reviews
Comment from chcbeck
The picture compliments your words , celebrating the new year looking forward to the future. I like how you say last year's promises are full of broken excuses.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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The picture compliments your words , celebrating the new year looking forward to the future. I like how you say last year's promises are full of broken excuses.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Thank You, chbeck.
Comment from Sambangi
A very nice poem on the new year and the goals. Very good rhyme maintained in simple words. Wish you a very happy prosperous new year 2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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A very nice poem on the new year and the goals. Very good rhyme maintained in simple words. Wish you a very happy prosperous new year 2016
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2016
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Thank You, Sambangi.
Comment from Gloria ....
I kinda dig your rappy New Year poem, Lynar. To me it reads in a modified minute poetic form which is high up among my favourite styles.
I love the classic artwork attached clearly illustrating out with the old and in with the new. Yes.
Very nicely done. Even though you reminded me I'm still working on goals from a decade ago. LOL.
Happy New Year to you!
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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I kinda dig your rappy New Year poem, Lynar. To me it reads in a modified minute poetic form which is high up among my favourite styles.
I love the classic artwork attached clearly illustrating out with the old and in with the new. Yes.
Very nicely done. Even though you reminded me I'm still working on goals from a decade ago. LOL.
Happy New Year to you!
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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Thank You, gloria.
Comment from Mastery
Hello, Lynar. I don't understand? You have been on the site almost as long as I have (2004) and I am a fan of yours because I get notes saying you posted work. Yet I rarely see a post of yours and I never get a review from you. Perhaps we can fix that this year because I sincerely enjoy your writing:
"Within spiritual heartstrings
She softly sings
This New Year goal
My joy not cold"
Great write! Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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Hello, Lynar. I don't understand? You have been on the site almost as long as I have (2004) and I am a fan of yours because I get notes saying you posted work. Yet I rarely see a post of yours and I never get a review from you. Perhaps we can fix that this year because I sincerely enjoy your writing:
"Within spiritual heartstrings
She softly sings
This New Year goal
My joy not cold"
Great write! Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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Thank You, Mastery
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You are welcome
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Thanks, Mastery.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem for the new year. The presentation is great--the art, the colored font, and the message. This seems to be in the format of a minute poem. If it is, then this line has only 7 syllables whereas a minute would have 8.
Within spiritual heartstrings [add our OR my ???]
If you intended it not to be a minute, then ignore that last sentence.
Anyway good job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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I enjoyed your poem for the new year. The presentation is great--the art, the colored font, and the message. This seems to be in the format of a minute poem. If it is, then this line has only 7 syllables whereas a minute would have 8.
Within spiritual heartstrings [add our OR my ???]
If you intended it not to be a minute, then ignore that last sentence.
Anyway good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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Thank You, jannypan.