2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Haiku (first morning light)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
43 total reviews
Comment from amada
Congratulations in winning this contest, Gypsy. I so like the image you paint in here with your words. Satori line, perfect. The artwork is spectacular...Woo! You go, girl.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Congratulations in winning this contest, Gypsy. I so like the image you paint in here with your words. Satori line, perfect. The artwork is spectacular...Woo! You go, girl.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Amada :) I appreciate your review and kind words.
Comment from Jaxpoet
Congratulation on a great write and very nice thought. The light of dawn is special and it's for only the early birds. It is amazing to see the huge amount talent that is exhibited by so many writers. It is really hard to make a choice. Thanks for the write
Jax
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Congratulation on a great write and very nice thought. The light of dawn is special and it's for only the early birds. It is amazing to see the huge amount talent that is exhibited by so many writers. It is really hard to make a choice. Thanks for the write
Jax
Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from GracieAnn
Dear Authro,
I have reread the rules to the contest to find that less than 17 syllables in the Haiku is permissible. Stunning presentation. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Dear Authro,
I have reread the rules to the contest to find that less than 17 syllables in the Haiku is permissible. Stunning presentation. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from judester
The word hazy is so apt to describe early morning light. My favorite time of day with hot coffee, sleepy dogs and a full day ahead. Oh yeah, I am also on the lake, cheers judester
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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The word hazy is so apt to describe early morning light. My favorite time of day with hot coffee, sleepy dogs and a full day ahead. Oh yeah, I am also on the lake, cheers judester
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :) you're lucky, your place sounds wonderful.
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with you poem'
it is awesome and the hues are in the correct light on the water. You captured my attention from the start I could vision the birds singing some where
Thanks for sharing.
Cookie.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I like the artwork you choose to go with you poem'
it is awesome and the hues are in the correct light on the water. You captured my attention from the start I could vision the birds singing some where
Thanks for sharing.
Cookie.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
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You're very welcome. Take care.
Cookie
Comment from Ben Colder
the photo and wording made me hear a lune calling in the distance. Good contest piece. Well arranged. I see nothing wrong. Best to you.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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the photo and wording made me hear a lune calling in the distance. Good contest piece. Well arranged. I see nothing wrong. Best to you.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the lovely review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from --Turtle.
This haiku has a strong warm initial concrete image for me, it brings the instant sensation of a warm season, water, and time of day, sunrise, there's nature and even a hush and sense of peace and quiet,
The satori line does a nice job of redefining the imagery, (one thing I thought was, wow, that's a scene you could just eat right up. A neat image, one you eat up with your eyes. I also get the sense of adding birds to the mix... the first birds that arrive, the ones wake up early enough, they get the worm(in this chase, a visual treat)
A nice strong haiku
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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This haiku has a strong warm initial concrete image for me, it brings the instant sensation of a warm season, water, and time of day, sunrise, there's nature and even a hush and sense of peace and quiet,
The satori line does a nice job of redefining the imagery, (one thing I thought was, wow, that's a scene you could just eat right up. A neat image, one you eat up with your eyes. I also get the sense of adding birds to the mix... the first birds that arrive, the ones wake up early enough, they get the worm(in this chase, a visual treat)
A nice strong haiku
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the lovely review. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Joy Graham
I like the image you evoke with your words. I would be able to imagine this scene if there was no picture attached. I like your third line of early bird special. Very nice. Good luck in this contest :)
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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I like the image you evoke with your words. I would be able to imagine this scene if there was no picture attached. I like your third line of early bird special. Very nice. Good luck in this contest :)
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Joy. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, First Morning Light, with its sixteen syllable, certainly captures the essence of this mind-blowing art. This is a powerful image that defines a sunrise.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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This haiku, First Morning Light, with its sixteen syllable, certainly captures the essence of this mind-blowing art. This is a powerful image that defines a sunrise.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Bill. I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
This is a very original, cute and skillfully written haiku you've
made for the contest. Your satori is very unexpected and fun
and your presentation is lovely.
Linda
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Poet,
This is a very original, cute and skillfully written haiku you've
made for the contest. Your satori is very unexpected and fun
and your presentation is lovely.
Linda
Comment Written 16-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)