A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Waves of Longing"Assorted poems of love
33 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Missy, I know there will be a lot who will relate to this...the feeling of emotions left behind...will we ever find peace...so very well expressed sweet girl...and so very well written...love your poem...and a beautiful picture...Luff Linda xxoo love
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hi Missy, I know there will be a lot who will relate to this...the feeling of emotions left behind...will we ever find peace...so very well expressed sweet girl...and so very well written...love your poem...and a beautiful picture...Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 31-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2015
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Hi Linda, I am sorry you didn't see this when it paid more hon. I thank you so much for leaving a review when it only paid 2 cents. :( I value your opinion so much!!
Luff ya,
Missy
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OH Missy, I don't read for the money I can get...I read for the love of the poem, or story...and to know my friends and fans better...and I value your friendship...luff ya you...you are so welcome...Linda xxoo
Comment from pbroussard209
love the picture you guys chose this time. It reminds me of the Pacific Ocean, The poem went nicely with the picture, showcasing the turmoil of emotions after being hurt by someone. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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love the picture you guys chose this time. It reminds me of the Pacific Ocean, The poem went nicely with the picture, showcasing the turmoil of emotions after being hurt by someone. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2015
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Thank you, sweetie for reading and reviewing this out of pay post.
I hope you get next one :)
Missy
Comment from padumachitta
Hi...ah eh, a sad on for this and so hits home for me...
i like the choice of words...and the layout...glad to see these challenges are still going...Anyway, I am back for a couple hours and wanted to catch one of yours!
padumachitta
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hi...ah eh, a sad on for this and so hits home for me...
i like the choice of words...and the layout...glad to see these challenges are still going...Anyway, I am back for a couple hours and wanted to catch one of yours!
padumachitta
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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:) Hi there, I am delighted that you stopped by and read and reviewed for the lousy 2 cents. I wish you had been around for the higher 67 cents. You review is especially nice considering this :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from G.B. Smith
Your love was that for me
a sleepy cove
with tides of love
lapping gently on the shore
I wish it still were
Bear
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Your love was that for me
a sleepy cove
with tides of love
lapping gently on the shore
I wish it still were
Bear
Comment Written 29-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015
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Hello my gentle Bear, it is a delightful surprise to see your name here :).
Thank you for all your kindness to me.
Always,
Missy
Comment from JTStone
A little more into the whimsical love, a little less sex this time?
Although it does sound like he tried...
Sounds akin to the emotions you left ...within me /Pounding unceasingly/ making no headway
But you opted for the softer gentler...
Your love was that for me a sleepy cove / with tides of love/ lapping gently on the shore
excellent poem girl, very visual.
JT
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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A little more into the whimsical love, a little less sex this time?
Although it does sound like he tried...
Sounds akin to the emotions you left ...within me /Pounding unceasingly/ making no headway
But you opted for the softer gentler...
Your love was that for me a sleepy cove / with tides of love/ lapping gently on the shore
excellent poem girl, very visual.
JT
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Hi JT, thanks sweetie for the touching review :)
Missy
Comment from Neonewman
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all of these "Picture this" group challenges. I love them all. This one is no exception, wonderfully crafted and melodic.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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I have thoroughly enjoyed reading all of these "Picture this" group challenges. I love them all. This one is no exception, wonderfully crafted and melodic.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 28-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Mornin, Steve.
Thanks for reading this one :). Thanks for letting my work touch you. So many wonderful writers, I am delighted to be included in this group :)
Always,
Missy
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You are welcome my friend!
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You are welcome my friend!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi there MS Missy,
I hear them too... I thought it to be my shores the only to erode... the echoed of thundering reoccurring thoughts... forever pounding-crumbling any hope that crashed upon my fragmented heart... ripping and gouging at the serenity that once was so abundant within the moonlit shimmer upon the rolling swell of desire... the unquenchable need that stilled my surging waves... yes, the one that delivered me to that sleepy cove with tides of love lapping so gently on the sandy shores of security... mine is just a thought-wave away in an idyllic destination... where suffering is only the thought of never ending.
Well, you know I can't help myself when presented with the taste of romance... and well, the title...'Waves of Longing' that was the perfect set up to what followed... your words stirred emotions and allowed me to dive into your wondrous waves of thought and all that from a picture... yes, I loved it... and yes, I hope your tide turns, for I feel you have so much to give... your heart sings it.
With our thoughts we create,
emotive metaphors,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Hi there MS Missy,
I hear them too... I thought it to be my shores the only to erode... the echoed of thundering reoccurring thoughts... forever pounding-crumbling any hope that crashed upon my fragmented heart... ripping and gouging at the serenity that once was so abundant within the moonlit shimmer upon the rolling swell of desire... the unquenchable need that stilled my surging waves... yes, the one that delivered me to that sleepy cove with tides of love lapping so gently on the sandy shores of security... mine is just a thought-wave away in an idyllic destination... where suffering is only the thought of never ending.
Well, you know I can't help myself when presented with the taste of romance... and well, the title...'Waves of Longing' that was the perfect set up to what followed... your words stirred emotions and allowed me to dive into your wondrous waves of thought and all that from a picture... yes, I loved it... and yes, I hope your tide turns, for I feel you have so much to give... your heart sings it.
With our thoughts we create,
emotive metaphors,
James vx's.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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James, what can I say. This is absolutely so lovely in ...and of itself. Is it any wonder that I wait for your reviews? Always so touching. :) I don't know the exact date and time that I first became a fan of yours, but I never want to lose your support ...your friendship. You are so, so special. :)
Always,
Missy
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That's a really beautiful thing to say... I hope you're still thinking it after the email... smile))))))))))... yeah, just sent it after three days deliberation... and you know I feel the exact same way about you, your reviews and support, right? Like I say... your heart sings within your words... and yeah, can't get enough of that melody... vx's.
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I did... And do!!!
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I did... And do!!!
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I did... And do!!!
Comment from Ulla
Missy, what a wonderful poem you have written to this picture. It express all the longing you have for the love in your life, just as the sea can evoke the same emotions. I liked this a lot and good luck in the contest. All best, Ulla
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Missy, what a wonderful poem you have written to this picture. It express all the longing you have for the love in your life, just as the sea can evoke the same emotions. I liked this a lot and good luck in the contest. All best, Ulla
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Hi girl!!! I have missed seeing you. I hope you have been well and busy :)
Thank you, sweetie, for this lovely review. It is not a contest hon. It is just a group of writers that I would love to see your name added to, who each take turns giving the group a piece of artwork to write a poem for. :) Come join us!!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello to my good friend.
I enjoyed this passionate piece and wish you the very best in the contest. This was well written and truly emotionally charged. Loyd
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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Hello to my good friend.
I enjoyed this passionate piece and wish you the very best in the contest. This was well written and truly emotionally charged. Loyd
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2015
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I had all but given up hope at seeing your name here again, Loyd. I am smiling with delight :).
Thanks for coming by and reading my work and leaving this lovely review.
Don't be a stranger, ok!!
Always,
Missy
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Hi Missy.
Glad to be missed. I just posted two poems yesterday. I had a little time, so came back for a few minutes. Thank you Lady! :-)
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Hi Missy.
Glad to be missed. I just posted two poems yesterday. I had a little time, so came back for a few minutes. Thank you Lady! :-)
Comment from Linda Engel
It is the longing to feel that comfort again that aches so much. Your imagery and rhythm are excellent and I enjoyed the poem. I like how you used the crashing waves and the pounding to express your pain while waiting for the tide to turn then letting the reader know how his love was like a sleepy cove with soft lapping movement, like soft love making, gently held you close. Oh to have that comfort one time.
Very Good.........
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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It is the longing to feel that comfort again that aches so much. Your imagery and rhythm are excellent and I enjoyed the poem. I like how you used the crashing waves and the pounding to express your pain while waiting for the tide to turn then letting the reader know how his love was like a sleepy cove with soft lapping movement, like soft love making, gently held you close. Oh to have that comfort one time.
Very Good.........
Comment Written 27-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2015
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Hey, girlie girl, how are you this fine day!!!
Thanks bunches for this so completely in tuned review, sugga!!
Missy xx
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Hugs!!!! Having a great rainy day, It is finally cooling down in Georgia.