Comment from Rob Caudle

Exceptional

A well deserved win the font was cool it helped and to the smile of a child ending line thanks for sending me over to take a look. It ha s been awhile since I was able to read a piece and smile as directed in the final line well done.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :) Thank you for the six stars.
Gypsy

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I like how this poem appeals to several senses: we see the rainbow "peeking: and the child "smiling" with delight. We also smell the rain and can almost feel the "soaked earth." Overall, you have conveyed that sense of good feeling and promise a rainbow always brings. Nicely done. Rod

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)
Gypsy

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

AH! What a lovely litter verse. And, you have presented this so well. It's a visual delight to read and enjoy the clever write. I love the way you put colour into your font. Very clever and well thought out.


soaked earth smells like rain
as rainbow peeks between clouds
a child smiles

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)
Gypsy

Comment from MLEaton

Excellent

Brilliant! No wonder you're a winner! This has it all - great content and presentation and I particularly like the rainbow coloured print. No wonder the child smiled. Well done!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

First off congratulations on a well-earned win. This is a beautiful presentation and tribute to the wonder and power of a rainbow to make a child smile.

Lovely job.

Gloria

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy

Comment from Delahay

Excellent

This is wonderful in how it describes a rainy day with a rainbow showing itself at the end.I can picture a landscape of water soaked ground with a beautiful rainbow painting the sky.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This is fantastic, I wish I had six stars left. First, congrats on your win. Phenomenal presentation, excellent haiku on all counts - a true winner! Loved this little gem, thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is beautiful. The colored fonts are so nice and really add to the overall enjoyment of your poem. Good job on the format. Congratulations on your win. I understand how this poem was the winner.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Many kudos for winning the contest. Your including the appeal to our sense of smell as well as sight is very effective. Your echoing the "rainbow" with your colorful text and perfect artwork is quite imaginative. You even included alliteration and your satori is superb. Cheers and hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy

Comment from ByeByeBirdie

Excellent

I love this haiku! It's so simple yet beautiful. I love the art work and the colors of writing you used. Thanks for sharing! Be blessed -ERC

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2015

Thank you very much. I really appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
~Gypsy