Christine's Poems
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Comment from NJK62
A highly effective senryu. The satori line works because of its inspired play on the word 'amused'. This is accomplished writing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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A highly effective senryu. The satori line works because of its inspired play on the word 'amused'. This is accomplished writing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much NJK62 for your very nice review and kind words. thanks for reading this and giving me feedback much appreciated Cheers Christine😃
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My pleasure.
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Thank you so much NJK62 for your very nice review and kind words. thanks for reading this and giving me feedback much appreciated Cheers Christine😃
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No problem.
Comment from LeslieP5
Always good to have a light hearted view of life and a sense of humor about things and oneself. I'm glad your keeping your family amused as their MUSE. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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Always good to have a light hearted view of life and a sense of humor about things and oneself. I'm glad your keeping your family amused as their MUSE. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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Thank you LeslieP5 for your lovely review and I tey never to take myself too seriously wouldn't know what to do then lol. yes the family MUSE is my lot in life ha ha . appreciate your comments and so a big Cheers to you Christine😃
Comment from scd41
You have senryued yourself very well. That you have a fine sense of humor is evident from the poem. Only those who can laugh at themselves are the best in it. Your last line was so funny; glad to be the muse of the family. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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You have senryued yourself very well. That you have a fine sense of humor is evident from the poem. Only those who can laugh at themselves are the best in it. Your last line was so funny; glad to be the muse of the family. Best of luck.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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Thank you scd41 for reading my senryu and seeing my side as I try never to be too serious, but can be if needed so at times that side can come around too, but on the whole I can do some dumb things at times and always laugh when I do . so appreciate your review with Cheers Christine
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Poet,
Yes, isn't it fun to be the amusement factor of the family......Hey! it's a dirty job but somebody has to do it!
Besides, a sense of humor is something you're born with...someone has to keep the masses entertained, lol.
Great entry into the contest...best of luck!
Bill
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Hello Poet,
Yes, isn't it fun to be the amusement factor of the family......Hey! it's a dirty job but somebody has to do it!
Besides, a sense of humor is something you're born with...someone has to keep the masses entertained, lol.
Great entry into the contest...best of luck!
Bill
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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thank you Bill for you time taken to read this and to review also much appreciated ,and yes someone had to do this awful job lol always fun gld you liked this with Cheers
Comment from Spitfire
Nice twist in the satori line. I like the idea of thinking of oneself as a muse. Actually, the first line could be satori too-- brain in overdrive. That describes me too!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Nice twist in the satori line. I like the idea of thinking of oneself as a muse. Actually, the first line could be satori too-- brain in overdrive. That describes me too!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Hi Spitfire Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. the family muse thats me most of the time, and also the one everyone turns to for help if things go wrong so duel role. thanks again with Cheers for your time too
Comment from Nosha17
Being a parent takes a lot of patience and time, but as long as your muse rubs off on them, that is the main thing. Good touch of humour and well expressed message. Good luck in the contest, Faye
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Being a parent takes a lot of patience and time, but as long as your muse rubs off on them, that is the main thing. Good touch of humour and well expressed message. Good luck in the contest, Faye
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you Faye for your review and ues at times i have the duel role of muse and confidant the one in the family who keeps them amused but also the one who everyone goes to , i dont take myself too seriously and love to have a go at myself quite insightful of my misgivings lol Thank again Cheers
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine humorous piece of poetry dear anonymous! You have successfully satired yourself.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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This is a fine humorous piece of poetry dear anonymous! You have successfully satired yourself.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you Rebekka for taking the time to read this and give me feedback I appreciate you comments and yes satire could be my middle name too lol glad you like this poem and thanks for the good luck message Cheers
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend.
Your poem was light hearted and a fun enjoyable read.
Thanks for using my artwork, I am honored.
My best to you, Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Hello poet friend.
Your poem was light hearted and a fun enjoyable read.
Thanks for using my artwork, I am honored.
My best to you, Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you Loyd, you have great images to compliment many poets work so thank you for having such a great range, and for your reviewcof this entry .with a big Cheer to you
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It was my pleasure. If you have time, might I invite you to check out my written works here on Fanstory.com as well.
Have a great evening.
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello.. nice touch that rings true..my own family watching my own brain on overdrive stay amused..happy that im happy. Cheers.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Hello.. nice touch that rings true..my own family watching my own brain on overdrive stay amused..happy that im happy. Cheers.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you Benjamin for your lovely words and yes staying positive and happy with a busy brain is OK with good Chhers to you
Comment from royowen
A jolly good entry in this senryu yourself contest, very amusing dialogue, the artwork works in with the poem really well, this definitely stands a chance, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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A jolly good entry in this senryu yourself contest, very amusing dialogue, the artwork works in with the poem really well, this definitely stands a chance, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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thank you Roy for reading this and your great review i hope it does Ok but just having fun is the main aim. with a big thanks and Cheers
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Most welcome