"The Gift of Life Two."
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "TheStarsStoodStillAsHeStarted2Breath"A book of beautiful poetry about life.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Another creative write for you. I read each stanza and each made me think. I like how you put this together and it easily kept my interest. Great job again.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Another creative write for you. I read each stanza and each made me think. I like how you put this together and it easily kept my interest. Great job again.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thankz ever, forever as ever can be...
I'll always miss my Jay...
Ricky1024
Comment from robyn corum
1.) "My God(!) (W)hat happened to me that (dreadful) (D- 'of') night?"
--> if I understand correctly, that is! *smile*
2.) "(Everything) was (all right)
--> 'alright' is not technically a word - it's a common misspelling.
Ricky, I'm sorry, sweetie, but I didn't understand this post at ALL. Perhaps you need to add more info to your Author Notes?
It's not a story, not a script, and not really a poem in the truest sense. Help!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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1.) "My God(!) (W)hat happened to me that (dreadful) (D- 'of') night?"
--> if I understand correctly, that is! *smile*
2.) "(Everything) was (all right)
--> 'alright' is not technically a word - it's a common misspelling.
Ricky, I'm sorry, sweetie, but I didn't understand this post at ALL. Perhaps you need to add more info to your Author Notes?
It's not a story, not a script, and not really a poem in the truest sense. Help!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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My fault but that was part A and this is part B..
4...Little Jay...
Lost Dad.