A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Love in the Moonlight"Assorted poems of love
17 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
Missy, this is outstanding! You put so much romance and passion in each word. I love the photo you added. I think the artwork that you add starts the mood right away. You definitely have a way with describing and detailing each emotion and feeling.
Shana :)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Missy, this is outstanding! You put so much romance and passion in each word. I love the photo you added. I think the artwork that you add starts the mood right away. You definitely have a way with describing and detailing each emotion and feeling.
Shana :)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Shana ... thank you hon! You always make me feel like a poet whether I am one or not :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Ric Myworld
"Lost in the night," they seem anything but lost. Sharing those feelings that are new and exciting every time they are experienced, from beginning to end. You had better stop filling my head with these crazy thought and ideas. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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"Lost in the night," they seem anything but lost. Sharing those feelings that are new and exciting every time they are experienced, from beginning to end. You had better stop filling my head with these crazy thought and ideas. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Oh no dear man... Why would I do that!!! Lol
Thanks for your special review Ric :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Missy. This is very romantic and sexy writing. I liked this stanza in particular:
"The grass under our blanket is soft
Perfect for the consummation of our love
Our bodies entwined, we are lost this night
Passion has us in its embrace. (Very good)
I have to tell you unfortunately that I can no longer review your work however for two reasons. One: I cannot tie up my time of reviewing fans with writes paying only 2 cents. It is very easy to review and build up member dollars without spending any real money. I have been reviewing your work, but seldom see any reviews from you that is the second reason. I will check in from time to time to see what you are paying and watch for your reviews. If things change I will be back. sorry..hope there's no hard feelings. You are a good writer. Bob
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Hi, Missy. This is very romantic and sexy writing. I liked this stanza in particular:
"The grass under our blanket is soft
Perfect for the consummation of our love
Our bodies entwined, we are lost this night
Passion has us in its embrace. (Very good)
I have to tell you unfortunately that I can no longer review your work however for two reasons. One: I cannot tie up my time of reviewing fans with writes paying only 2 cents. It is very easy to review and build up member dollars without spending any real money. I have been reviewing your work, but seldom see any reviews from you that is the second reason. I will check in from time to time to see what you are paying and watch for your reviews. If things change I will be back. sorry..hope there's no hard feelings. You are a good writer. Bob
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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I am so sorry to hear that Bob. I understand. You are simply late getting to my post hon. It paid more than 2 cents...:(
But you are right about me not being prompt with the reviewing of your work, hon. I have let alot of my favorite writers down. I have had some things going on and I put a post up saying I am sorry.
There is absolutely no hard feelings. I want you to do what is best for you, my friend. You are such a talented man and I wish you all the best. I will miss seeing your name, however :(
Love,
Missy
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Thanks, Missy, I do my reviews every single day and don't see how time could have run out on a three or four day certificate paying more member dollars?? Must be a glitch in the system. If you don't buy a cert for 6.965 or 9.95 (with member dollars of course) you won't have any promotion beyond what they give you....2 cents. Blessings. Bob
Comment from Ulla
Oh Missy, this is yet again one of your lovely love poems which you write so well. I really do like reading them and yes it was a very pleasing one. You have found your niche I think. All the best. Ulla
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Oh Missy, this is yet again one of your lovely love poems which you write so well. I really do like reading them and yes it was a very pleasing one. You have found your niche I think. All the best. Ulla
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Ulla. I am sorry if you didn't get this when it was worth more to read.
Always,
Missy
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Oh my yes it did please me.. Another one of your full of passion words that stir ones imagination.. Maybe this might even get me back to the keyboard once again XXOO
TK
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Oh my yes it did please me.. Another one of your full of passion words that stir ones imagination.. Maybe this might even get me back to the keyboard once again XXOO
TK
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Well, after this long absence I'm sure you have plenty tarnish for me to polish Sir Knight :)
XX
Missy
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, I love reading love poems...and the one is sooo romantic...so very touching...your colors and your picture ...stunning...so very well written sweet girl...lovers forever...beautiful../Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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HI Missy, I love reading love poems...and the one is sooo romantic...so very touching...your colors and your picture ...stunning...so very well written sweet girl...lovers forever...beautiful../Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Thank you hon for this very special review xx
Big hug
Missy
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you are always so welcome Missy...bigger hugs back...luff xxoo
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
ah, my favorite kind of love... under the blanket of stars in a moon-lit union and blended together in a surrendered dream... yeah, love nature, but don't forget the insect repellent, you know next to water and all... smile)))))))))).
Beautiful words of love dear lady... something so magic drifting within these thoughts... life seems to harsh at times and doesn't allow us the beauty of what this wonderfully written passion offers... so I'll take preference to drift into the magic of this dream and leave the troubles of the world behind... love the visual... although the font's a bit bright... I would have taken it down into a softer shade of pink... one of the colours in the in your visual delight... no matter, my cup still runneth over with the joy of what seems to be your calling card!
With our thoughts we create,
the dreams made from love,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Hi Missy,
ah, my favorite kind of love... under the blanket of stars in a moon-lit union and blended together in a surrendered dream... yeah, love nature, but don't forget the insect repellent, you know next to water and all... smile)))))))))).
Beautiful words of love dear lady... something so magic drifting within these thoughts... life seems to harsh at times and doesn't allow us the beauty of what this wonderfully written passion offers... so I'll take preference to drift into the magic of this dream and leave the troubles of the world behind... love the visual... although the font's a bit bright... I would have taken it down into a softer shade of pink... one of the colours in the in your visual delight... no matter, my cup still runneth over with the joy of what seems to be your calling card!
With our thoughts we create,
the dreams made from love,
James vx's.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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James what a beautiful loving review this is :)
Big hug!!!
Missy
Comment from pbroussard209
Rekindling love can be wonderful. Its like starting over and the magic of first love ignites. Great poem with a lot of lovey imagery, the flow was smooth and the poem was easy to read and understand. Great job.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Rekindling love can be wonderful. Its like starting over and the magic of first love ignites. Great poem with a lot of lovey imagery, the flow was smooth and the poem was easy to read and understand. Great job.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Thank you P for the lovely review. I am delighted hon, with all the affirmatives you see in my poem :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from mfowler
I think your love poems are working really well in this free verse format you've adopted more recently. It gives you freedom to explore line length, imagery and ideas far more.
This is another passionate and sensuous read. It tells of a woman awaiting the night to embrace and consummate a love with a man whom she loves. I really liked these things:
There, by the cool clear waters of the river
The blanket of our love is spread....excellent metaphor and a captivating start.
Eyes as dark as the night
Skin bronze from the sun, strong arms to fall into
Lips soft and full made for only my kisses...lovely descriptive phrasing giving this man an image to die for.
We push all doubts aside
As once again ... we become lovers: very nice closing.
Here's where the Teach comes out. I hope you don't mind. Only verse 1, promise.
and
I stand before you beginning to shiver with
Heart pounding, raw emotions held in check by a thread..this would benefit from an edit to improve the flow.
eg and (cut the 'and')
I stand before you shivering
Heart pounding, raw emotions held in check by a thread
Now it reads:
There, by the cool clear waters of the river
The blanket of our love is spread
I stand before you shivering
Heart pounding, raw emotions held in check by a thread
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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I think your love poems are working really well in this free verse format you've adopted more recently. It gives you freedom to explore line length, imagery and ideas far more.
This is another passionate and sensuous read. It tells of a woman awaiting the night to embrace and consummate a love with a man whom she loves. I really liked these things:
There, by the cool clear waters of the river
The blanket of our love is spread....excellent metaphor and a captivating start.
Eyes as dark as the night
Skin bronze from the sun, strong arms to fall into
Lips soft and full made for only my kisses...lovely descriptive phrasing giving this man an image to die for.
We push all doubts aside
As once again ... we become lovers: very nice closing.
Here's where the Teach comes out. I hope you don't mind. Only verse 1, promise.
and
I stand before you beginning to shiver with
Heart pounding, raw emotions held in check by a thread..this would benefit from an edit to improve the flow.
eg and (cut the 'and')
I stand before you shivering
Heart pounding, raw emotions held in check by a thread
Now it reads:
There, by the cool clear waters of the river
The blanket of our love is spread
I stand before you shivering
Heart pounding, raw emotions held in check by a thread
Comment Written 11-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Thank you my dearest friend :) and Teach.
I have made the suggested improvements. Your review and crit is amazing and more than I could hope for! Thank you , Mark!!
Always your student,
Missy
Comment from petalangela
Your poetry as always talks to us of love devotion and adoration. The fact that it talks to us shows that your deep emotions are entwined within your words
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Your poetry as always talks to us of love devotion and adoration. The fact that it talks to us shows that your deep emotions are entwined within your words
Comment Written 11-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Bless you Pet...Love you bunches ♥
Always in my heart,
Missy