A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "I Am Your Canvas"Assorted poems of love
76 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is a lovely presentation, Justafan. I think a lot of people are inspired to write from images and your beautiful poem proves that. My favorite part: ...paint my large brown eyes with the earthiness. Now, that's poetic! Lou
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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This is a lovely presentation, Justafan. I think a lot of people are inspired to write from images and your beautiful poem proves that. My favorite part: ...paint my large brown eyes with the earthiness. Now, that's poetic! Lou
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Wow, Lou, thank you so much for this lovely review. I am delighted that you loved any part of my work :) You have made my day, thank you!!!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Senyai
Lovely work, Justafan! Beautiful imagery created by your words with a lovely painting to match. Don't you love to be inspired by art, it's such fun to "paint" with words.
Look forward to more of your work.
All the best,
Senyai
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Lovely work, Justafan! Beautiful imagery created by your words with a lovely painting to match. Don't you love to be inspired by art, it's such fun to "paint" with words.
Look forward to more of your work.
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 09-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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I do, I do, Senyai...love to be inspired by art! And then use words to paint a story. Be it pencils, watercolor, charcoal or oils, words are powerful and can be used to just outline a feeling or emotion or go the distance and make a mural of it :)
Thank you hon for this lovely, appreciated review.
Always,
Missy
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You're most welcome, Missy :)
Comment from I am Cat
Wow... what a beautiful presentation, first of all... the artwork is absolutely gorgeous! I love it! (I wish I had created it!) ;)
The color of the font is gorgeous also and fits the artwork beautifully... that being said, I did have to blow it up (and I have pretty good eyesight for an old chick. ;)
and a 15 inch monitor as well... so it's a bit small, I don't know if you could have blown it up any larger because of the layout or not.. but the script does make it difficult to read... I fear some people might pass it by if they can't read it well....
that being said also....
I loved your 'take' on the artwork... it's lovely and sensual... it's wonderful.
The last two lines tripped me because you said, '...your love fills me with color me... Radiant!" (I almost wanted another 'color' or something there.... punctuation? but I know what you meant. It's lovely in its totality and its sensuality. ;)
Well done
Cat
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Wow... what a beautiful presentation, first of all... the artwork is absolutely gorgeous! I love it! (I wish I had created it!) ;)
The color of the font is gorgeous also and fits the artwork beautifully... that being said, I did have to blow it up (and I have pretty good eyesight for an old chick. ;)
and a 15 inch monitor as well... so it's a bit small, I don't know if you could have blown it up any larger because of the layout or not.. but the script does make it difficult to read... I fear some people might pass it by if they can't read it well....
that being said also....
I loved your 'take' on the artwork... it's lovely and sensual... it's wonderful.
The last two lines tripped me because you said, '...your love fills me with color me... Radiant!" (I almost wanted another 'color' or something there.... punctuation? but I know what you meant. It's lovely in its totality and its sensuality. ;)
Well done
Cat
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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The font was something I worked on way more than the actual poem. Trying to get the perfect diamond shape was making me crazy...lol. So, I had to settle :(. So, I apologize for the smallness of the font my friend. From one ol chick to another...It is hard for me to read too....lol!!!
Thanks so much for this splendid review(that I can read with no problem...lol).
Always,
Missy
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
I enjoyed this. I am a horror writer, so this is an unusual review for me. Very descriptive and chock full of imagery. You speak from the heart and that is what poetry is all about. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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I enjoyed this. I am a horror writer, so this is an unusual review for me. Very descriptive and chock full of imagery. You speak from the heart and that is what poetry is all about. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015
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Christof, as you freely admit this is unusual for you, I want to thank you especially loudly for doing so! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU. :)
I am honored, honestly that you left your comfort zone and read and reviewed my work.
Always,
Missy
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Anytime.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I really like the picture and it goes perfect with your poem. We all need someone who can make us feel bright and vibrant and if you don't have someone like that well then you need find the person who will do it. Great job friend
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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I really like the picture and it goes perfect with your poem. We all need someone who can make us feel bright and vibrant and if you don't have someone like that well then you need find the person who will do it. Great job friend
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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I think you are right about finding the right person. Some of us go through life half fulfilled. It is a sad fact. Thank you for this lovely review "E".
Always,
Missy
Comment from Verdugo Bolivar
I like the End "Color Me Radiant" You brought the picture to life. She comes off as a seductress in love with her creator the artist. Very good, Keep writing
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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I like the End "Color Me Radiant" You brought the picture to life. She comes off as a seductress in love with her creator the artist. Very good, Keep writing
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Hello, Mr. Bolivar. Thank you for this lovely review of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from RGstar
Lovely...not more needed to say. Simple, beautiful and creative. Love the elements of colour and the actions depicted by them. Not a difficult write, but who says beautiful poetry must be. Soft, sensual and seductive.
Bravo.
Have a lovely day
RGstar
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Lovely...not more needed to say. Simple, beautiful and creative. Love the elements of colour and the actions depicted by them. Not a difficult write, but who says beautiful poetry must be. Soft, sensual and seductive.
Bravo.
Have a lovely day
RGstar
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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My, my, my what a lovely review "RG". Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Bill Schott
This diamond-shaped poem certainly draws on the multi-colored art piece that stands with it. The verve associated with the hot colors resonates in the poems words. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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This diamond-shaped poem certainly draws on the multi-colored art piece that stands with it. The verve associated with the hot colors resonates in the poems words. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Mr. Schott, thank you kindly for this especially nice review, Sir.
I am pleased to see your name here :) You are very talented writer.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, I found your poem pleasing and romantic. Your words are direct and passionate. You filled them with vivid metaphors for love. Your presentation is nice, too, although the cursive font is harder to read than block font. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Yes, I found your poem pleasing and romantic. Your words are direct and passionate. You filled them with vivid metaphors for love. Your presentation is nice, too, although the cursive font is harder to read than block font. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Apologies for the size of the font, Sis Cat. Thanks for the generous review my friend :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from padumachitta
Hi...suer discriptive poem with a wonderful word choice. i like the lay out, it gives movement to the poem and keeps the eye and heart moving
padumachitta
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Hi...suer discriptive poem with a wonderful word choice. i like the lay out, it gives movement to the poem and keeps the eye and heart moving
padumachitta
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Wow, thanks for the lovely review Padumachitta!! Hope to see your name again here on my page :)
Always,
Missy