"The Gift of Life Two."
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Brainless Mode!"A book of beautiful poetry about life.
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Comment from Bryana
LITTLRE...LITTLE
ffel...feel
I thought it wasn't fiction when I saw you
in a motorcycle and I know that an accident
in one of those could be very dangerous.
Just be careful I don't want to read a write
like this and be biographical .
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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LITTLRE...LITTLE
ffel...feel
I thought it wasn't fiction when I saw you
in a motorcycle and I know that an accident
in one of those could be very dangerous.
Just be careful I don't want to read a write
like this and be biographical .
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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The cycle was in-pounded and I have actually fallen a sleep
{for a few seconds} and woke up to my lost of balance.
Thanks Bryana.
Ruicky1024.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, ricky, a great slam poem by you, you can feel the buildup of the emotions with each line, I enjoyed reading this one. one error. can you feel the sparks ignite instead of can you ffel the sparklks ignite.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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this is an excellent write, ricky, a great slam poem by you, you can feel the buildup of the emotions with each line, I enjoyed reading this one. one error. can you feel the sparks ignite instead of can you ffel the sparklks ignite.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much Sweet and thanks for your time.
Ricky1024.