Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

I like this poem very much. there is a spiritual touch to it

Words written with sunshine
Bring rhapsody
To a soul filled with happiness
And I dance
To the rhythm
Of its rhymes

Well done, keep writing, Mary

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thanks

Comment from hannahorion

Excellent

Free verse: Title:A Rhapsody Of The Heart. Comments:The song of the mockingbird brings with it feelings of appreciation for being in love. The "words" of the song of the mockingbird were written in "sunshine" and form a rhapsody that causes ones soul to be filled with happiness and the desire to dance. I really found this poem to be succinct yet very descriptive. I thought it was worthy of five stars. I wished that it was a little longer .

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015

Thanks for the review. I looked to see if I should make it longer but every time I read it my heart said no.

Thanks

reply by hannahorion on 26-Jul-2015

Cant go against the heart. Its perfect the way it is.