Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

There always has to be a pie, normally a lemon meringue, after something like this. I was expecting them to sit up and throw it. Lol, Bill, you have one heck of an imagination!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 07-May-2022

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reply by the author on 07-May-2022

I thought the pie would be unexpected.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I laughed even though it didn't make a whole lot of sense. Does it have something to do with unemployed clowns? Or only clowns are weird enough to carry sledge hammers inside their jackets? Or, there's always a pie in the face at the end of the tunnel?

I give up, but like most slapstick comedy I did laugh.

Gloria

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015

This was unfortunate.

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I think you had a lot of fun with this, Bill. I didn't quite understand where you were going with it. But now that I mention it, it had about the same relevance as the Three Stooges sketches.

This makes me wonder, is that is your intent with this little sketch?

I honestly don't know how to critique it.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015

This was unfortunate.