Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

good morning gypsy blue

the format is in true form and count
your chosen words deliver imagery
may we all dream in color
well done and presented

thank you for sharing your talent
good luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015

Thank you Ann Marie, I really appreciate your review.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This is a beautiful presentation. The pairing of the picture and your verse makes for a powerful statement. I hope you do well in this contest. You have picked a wonderful topic and executed it well.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello author
you indeed have -

-two lines of grammatically interconnected concrete imagery
of three colors red, white and blue
-a satori line of reflection or observation (fire breath)

-a kigo, seasonal reference Winter)

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you Gert, I appreciate your review and feedback. Why is 'fire breath' the satori line? I thought it was 'i dream in color', I would appreciate your feedback.

reply by Gert sherwood on 30-Jun-2015

Well I could be wrong. I just like that line
Smiles to you.

Gert

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Comment from --Turtle.

Excellent

This haiku uses the images of dragons, the elements of hot and cold, and has an after reflection of considering dragons and the colors as things that make up dreams.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you :) I appreciate your review.

Comment from Mary H-W

Excellent

This one got me thinking, as is wasn't straight forward. I suppose 'fire breath' would warm things up...even winter nights! I like your writing (and the picture). It's cute and spellbinding.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

thank you for your review, i appreciate your feedback

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Great use of color i.e. blue to show the warmth. I love the image that comes toind. Good strong haiku. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

thank you gwhargis, i appreciate your review and kind words

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This verse is spot-on for the contest, being 17 syllablesL
blue dragon fire breath
warms the winter night for me
I dream in color
It was fun to read. I wonder who dreams in black and white? Maybe colour blind people?

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

LOL men dream in black and white, women dream in color. Thank you for the review Curly Girly.

Comment from Terry wrote

Excellent

This is a wll-written haiku, and the illustration you've chosen is superbly relevant to the poem.
I enjoy reading Haiku Poetry, as I'm a believer in Strunk and White's rule of thumb: "omit unneccesary words."
Haiku such as yours delivers an elegant portrait with few syllables.
Thank you for sharing this with all of us.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you Terry, I really appreciate your review.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is an interesting entry about a mythical creature, the blue dragon. And it is interesting also if you truly do dream in color. I understand that's kind of rare. (Little SPAG nitpick: In line two, the verb should be "warms" instead of "warm" to make the noun and the verb agree.) Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thank you very much for your excellent review. thank you for catching that error.