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Beautiful Death

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from birth I have longed for death

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I think this is a well written poem. For me it does a wonderful job of showing the reality of depression. And you do so from the first person narrative that has a big impact. Great job.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
    Thank you.
Comment from cmowen87
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I do like this poem. I understand the constant need to be everything to everyone all the time. The constant demand on our time leaving us just our dreams as an escape. Great job

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
    Thank you.