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The Children

Children are the world's hope.

4 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi Numero Dos, children are the further...I hope and pray they run it better than we have...turn back to God where so many have walked away...a wonderful poem you...and a so perfect picture...love ya you....Luff Linda xxoo soon

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
    Mine Uno! Good morning. Thank you for reading and for the six stars. You bring sunlight to my life!

    Had a bad night last night. My Gerd shot up stomach acid into my mouth and I woke up in pain. That acid hurts so terribly. Took me an hour of acute suffering before I could go back to sleep and then my sleep was fitfull, afraid it would happen again. So, this morn I am stacked tired upon tired.

    Penny came over yesterday evening and brought me some cherry Dr. Pepper cause I had told her I had been out for two weeks. She also brought my Foxy for a visit which makes me very happy. Since she didn't get back together with her other ex, Margaret, who visited her recently, she is being really nice to me . . . but still runs her mouth sometimes and won't shut up. But, she is better than she was, overall.

    You get your rest and drive safely down to Florida. Take good care of that granddaughter. I'm sure that you are important to her; probably add some balance to her life.

    The other Linda and your friend.
reply by l.raven on 01-Jul-2015
    I am so sorry you had such a bad night...I know how bad that can hurt...you should call me when you can't sleep...I am always here for you Dos...so glad Penny came over with some cherry Dr, Pepper...I know she still loves you...I will drive carefully...and take care of my granddaughter...she is an angel...now call when you can't sleep...I am awake late a lot of times...will talk at ya soon...love ya Dos...always a friend...xxoo
Comment from mkflood
Excellent
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I did 2 drawings on this subject..this one and another called "children follow our lead".. Good story and my drawing worked well with it. Good story and thanks again for including my work with yours. Thanks again..mkflood

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2015
    mkflood: and, thank you so much for letting me borrow it! I have no talent for drawing pictures with paints/charcoal/water colors/crayons, although I have tried. Something in me wants to draw, but I'm better positioned to paint with words, apparently. livelyinda
reply by mkflood on 02-Jul-2015
    I'm the same way..I sux writing but I can draw a good story..wink..thanks again..wink
reply by mkflood on 27-Jul-2015
    All I work with is sharpie and bic pens...wink
Comment from robina1978
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Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. You ask us to look at the children, grandchildren and great-. The parents should teach them so much to live in this world. Mainly compassion and no wars.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
    Thank you, robina1978, for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from ravenblack
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Our children our our future and future generations are going to have a lot to tackle. The key to carrying on as you state in the third stanza, compassion and love. And teaching that is up to us. The future could be bright if it is in bright hands. Excellent poem!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
    Thank you ravenblack, for reading and commenting. livelylinda